can't waut for more!
A bit rushed tho. Cant wait to see how it progresses. Cat
Keep it up;-) Soular
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.
Realistic and revealing. Keep writing the stories of your experiences.
Hopefully, this is the first of many chapters. The start was pretty good, and I am definitely interested. I really hope you continue. Great start!
Good start.
Hot.
You don't use protection for a one night stand? You luck this is a fantasy lol
shit happening too fast face fucking in the club not knowing the guy then fucking no condom one night stand, not my cup of tea
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great start
can't waut for more!
Not bad...
A bit rushed tho. Cant wait to see how it progresses. Cat
Nice beginning...
Keep it up;-)
Soular
FANTASTIC START
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE.
Nice short story
Realistic and revealing. Keep writing the stories of your experiences.
First of many....
Hopefully, this is the first of many chapters. The start was pretty good, and I am definitely interested. I really hope you continue. Great start!
Nice
Good start.
Very good
Hot.
I like it but
You don't use protection for a one night stand? You luck this is a fantasy lol
its alright...but
shit happening too fast face fucking in the club not knowing the guy then fucking no condom one night stand, not my cup of tea
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