All Comments on 'A Ride to Heaven and Back Ch. 02'

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SmallwandaSmallwandaalmost 16 years ago
Nice touch

Well done again and a lot of tension added to them. Cool story all up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
well done

keep it up. i like this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good job

I hope there's more. Can't leave us hanging like this! Nice job with the character development, and adding some tensions to the situation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
GREAT STORY!

Fantastic story! I'm on the edge of my seat here wanting more! Will definitely be looking out for more!

hotcocoa6904hotcocoa6904almost 16 years ago
Excellent Story!!

Glad to see that you decided to continue the story. Even better than the last entry!! Devlin sounds so sexy!! Don't make us wait too long for the next entry.

MalkorMalkoralmost 16 years ago
Looking forward to more...

of this ride. I truly can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
WOOT!

So glad to see another entry!

Doing a great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Hot

As someone who works in the trucking industry, this story really touches home. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
hurry!!!

i cant wait for the next one!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
VERY Nice Read Indeedy!!

please do no delay in continuing this..... I just discovered you and I can stand to be left hanging. Nice story line, plot, relationship development.

Looking forward to the follow up and subsequent passion... make the culmination hard as well as sensual :-).... so GIT TO IT DAMMIT!!

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Good second chapter

A good chapter of continuation, although I consider that the sexual attraction began too quickly, the story is still very pleasant.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

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