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A Ride to Heaven and Back Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Smallwanda06/12/08

Nice touch

Well done again and a lot of tension added to them. Cool story all up.

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by Anonymous06/12/08

well done

keep it up. i like this story.

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by Anonymous06/12/08

Good job

I hope there's more. Can't leave us hanging like this! Nice job with the character development, and adding some tensions to the situation.

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by Anonymous06/12/08

GREAT STORY!

Fantastic story! I'm on the edge of my seat here wanting more! Will definitely be looking out for more!

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by hotcocoa690406/12/08

Excellent Story!!

Glad to see that you decided to continue the story. Even better than the last entry!! Devlin sounds so sexy!! Don't make us wait too long for the next entry.

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by Malkor06/12/08

Looking forward to more...

of this ride. I truly can't wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous06/12/08

WOOT!

So glad to see another entry!
Doing a great job!

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by Anonymous06/13/08

Hot

As someone who works in the trucking industry, this story really touches home. Thanks.

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by Anonymous06/16/08

hurry!!!

i cant wait for the next one!

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by Anonymous06/17/08

VERY Nice Read Indeedy!!

please do no delay in continuing this..... I just discovered you and I can stand to be left hanging. Nice story line, plot, relationship development.

Looking forward to the follow up and subsequent passion... make the culmination hard as well as sensual :-).... so GIT TO IT DAMMIT!!

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by TheOldRomantic12/28/16

Good second chapter

A good chapter of continuation, although I consider that the sexual attraction began too quickly, the story is still very pleasant.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

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