by SquiresBoy
A well written story with a nice bit of role reversal in it.
Nicely done.
Great potential and though not very erotic very engrossing non the less. Next time more detail.
Great job, contrary to the opinion asking for more details I thought the story was very erotic and had a lot more feeling in it than most stories, while remaining just as erotic. Great job, well written and great plot, nice ending too. Thanks.
That was amazing! The way you write flows so fluently and the storyline was great! You have got an amazing talent as a writer x