Anyone that can incorporate the "Incredible Hulk" into a story and make it work has my vote!
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Anonymous03/12/15
a wreck
Any story that presents a caring loving things as this and then the author feels the absolute requirement to include anal sex is a pure wreck and the author lives in the sewer.
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Anonymous03/12/15
A Wreck?
You think the author lives in the sewer because he wrote about anal sex? You know, some people might feel that way about you if you like incest. Not every story is going to appeal to everyone. Different strokes for different folks. Too bad you felt the need to name calling and such a negative attitude.
Please provide a link to your stories so we can see what exemplary story writing we should aspire to.
My question to you is why you're even reading stories here. If you don't like them, don't read them! Well written story, LeMann.
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Anonymous03/12/15
Re: Wreck by anonymous
My question to you is why you're even comments here. If you don't like them, don't read them, you derp!
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Anonymous03/12/15
LOVED IT
Don't ever stop writing, because you know how to make it so real. Have you ever consider divorcing the wife and take your filipino mother as your own " so called wife" ? I would have let Filipino go! They know how to please there man. They would rock your world and you would not anyone else. 8===D
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Nice job!
Anyone that can incorporate the "Incredible Hulk" into a story and make it work has my vote!
a wreck
Any story that presents a caring loving things as this and then the author feels the absolute requirement to include anal sex is a pure wreck and the author lives in the sewer.
A Wreck?
You think the author lives in the sewer because he wrote about anal sex? You know, some people might feel that way about you if you like incest. Not every story is going to appeal to everyone. Different strokes for different folks. Too bad you felt the need to name calling and such a negative attitude.
Please provide a link to your stories so we can see what exemplary story writing we should aspire to.
Wreck by anonymous
My question to you is why you're even reading stories here. If you don't like them, don't read them! Well written story, LeMann.
Re: Wreck by anonymous
My question to you is why you're even comments here. If you don't like them, don't read them, you derp!
LOVED IT
Don't ever stop writing, because you know how to make it so real. Have you ever consider divorcing the wife and take your filipino mother as your own " so called wife" ? I would have let Filipino go! They know how to please there man. They would rock your world and you would not anyone else. 8===D
Hot Read***
Thanks for sharing.
Good story
Natural Filipino mom is better do not need big tits. Most will do anything to help son in need of instruction.
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