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Cant put consequences on this?
She is a betraying, self centered, egotistical slut, fucking for money. What do you call that, oh yeah, I remember prostitute/whore. Husband needs to sue for divorce and sole custody of the child. The mother is not a fit role model for a female child! One gets drunk and fucked by willingly getting drunk and fucked. One fucks for promotions by willingly turning into a whore and fucking your superiors. I'm sorry did I see the loving wife there, sorry no I didnt, once she decided to betray her husband she went all the way with it. I am glad she felt guilty about it, for that the husband can forgive and forget her.
destory the boss and divorced the wife
sometime i wonder what world you come from.men don't take wives back after fucking other men.she is another man whore now.she make her bed,now she should sleep on it.
A good read, but....
You say you love both characters? How can you love the wife? You created a woman that cheated once, and though I do believe anyone can slip once and should not consider their spouse a priest, but suck it up and live with the guilt, however she is using that to justify cheating again. In addition, a smart woman with a tape recorder or a visit to HR could get the promotion and take the SOB's balls at the same time. Well written and I do like Charlie, but Laylal, at least so far, seems like she is selling herself and justifying doing it. Good character she may be, but not one to be liked.
Well!
Hell of a start. Waiting to see where this will go. Really looking foward to the rest, Thanks!
why does TheCELT think wife is a good character?
what is there to Love about Layla? In the end she is as STUPID as George Bush and THAT makes this a bad story.
Given how skilled she is professionally it should of occured to her that a BOSS who says fuck me and get promoted dont fuck me and get demoted... Just might be lying.
The Fact that her 1st high school boyfriend treatd her like crap and then again in the hotel room makes her actions / reasoning even more difficult to understand.
in the real world being this fucking stupid usually costs you something.
I cannot figure out why this author thinks Layla is such a interesting Character.
okay, so what?
Each time she fucks around, it is gonna be "the last"... So what? What's so special about her?
During the up-coming couseling/therapy sessions
she's going to reveal her fuck --- her being fucked hard, by a bigger dick --- with Jake.
and patient Charly's gonna cry and say, "Come here, honey. I am so sorry, I was there to comfort you. I am so sorry, I did not make myself available to you, in your deep dark moments, so that you bore all the pain by yourself. That bastard former ex boyfriend of yours... How he could have hurt you so! I am so angry,,, with him!, for giving you alchohol and fucking you so hard!
I am even more sorry, you didn't feel you could tell me. Now, after having been fucked so dementedly by your boss, EVEN if you chose NOT to keep my warnings in mind, all I can say is: I am so sorry I was there in NEITHER circumstances for you.
Go comfort her, the good/smart Therapit "suggested".
Charly goes over and comforts his beloved and hurting wife. "I will get those two bastards for doing this to you, Layla," he whispers to her.
"Oh, no, my beloved Charlie... don't do any hting rash like that! It's partly my fault, that I did what I did, that they did that to me... I have no learned my lesson. I will be the most faithful wife from now on, okay?"
"I know you will, honey! Oh, I am so glad you give me this chance to tell you how sorry I am that I was not there for your when you were going through those terrible circumstances! Please, forgive me!"
"No, Charlie, my beloved, I need you to forgive me."
"No, dear beloved and hurting Layla, I need you to forgive me, since I failed as a husband, to protect his wife from predatory and evil men!"
"You two are doing the right thing, Charily and Layla: support each other, be honest with each other. Forgive each other for not being there in your most needy moments! You are an examplary couple! My job is done, now that you renewed your life and trust in each other again."
"Thanks, doc. You're a life saver!"
"Don't mention it; it's my job"!
LOL
Surprises coming ?
I quoted the maximum for your usual good writing although I find it a bit confusing as so far it would fit perfectly into your consequences series. I wonder if your next posting will have a surprise in it. You say to like both characters. So far I don't and some comments show the same feelings. All she has done is deliberately cheated on her husband. The first time may be caused by the thrill of her success and with lowered inhibitions due to the alcohol, although that doesn't justify it. Now it's a well thought over and deliberate betrayal that she is trying to justify in her mind by the expected results, her promotion and the money that it would bring to them. What a consolation price. A simple tape recorder, a talk with her husband and/or (like somebody suggested) informing management of what Carson required of her would have been the logical way to handle all of this. How can such an intelligent woman go this road of destruction. Cause she wants to ? Cause she doen't consider the consequences ? And that brings us back to the beginning. Your story would fit perfectly in your consequences series. Just a page more with a few explanations would have done it in your usual style : cut dry, sharp and to the point. Going to surprise us this time ?? G.Belgium.
I Hope. . .
. . . he doesn't wimp out and take the slut back. Suspenseful "whorror" story, I'm on nins & peedles for part 2.
Lay-la's name says it all . . .
I'm not a "shrink," but it seems Layla has been bored with ordinary, steady, middle-of-the-road Charlie. Layla is attractive and supposedly intelligent (amazing how people with high I.Q. scores can act stupidly at times). I can't see how she would have a negative self-image (such is often the explanation for letting jerks like ex-football jock Jake do a quickie on her to get his rocks off). She lacks confidence and needs Carson's recommendation to help her career along? Her job counts for more than her husband? I think deep down it is the thrill of the risk and excitement of the unknown that are driving her to fuck around. Or possibly it is a poor self-image, so she wants to punish herself by doing this wrongful thing so she can then feel bad about herself . . . Such women usually come from a background of incest and/or abuse, but there is no such indication in this story. The amazing thing is that she can rationalize the entire cheating event. As others have commented, she is smart enough to know she can get Carson in trouble for sexual harassment with a snap of her fingers. A tape recorder would be icing on the cake; in the corporate world these days, a woman claiming harassment is almost always believed over the denial of the involved male. I can only conclude she wants to cheat, and she rationalizes it is simply to build a better life for her family. "Ah, the hardships women go through, men just don't understand." The sex would mean nothing, would not affect her love for steady, predictable Charlie, the anchor for the family. Is she doing this because she wants to be an easy "lay?" She might be the woman about whom Eric Clapton was thinking when he sang the song "Layla."
Is Christine Charlie's?
Is Christine Charlie's daughter or Jake's child? The ultimate betrayal?
Whore Wife
What a whore of a wife. You implied in the preface that there will be no consequences for the cheater. I am okay with that only because I really like the character of the husband. ***** What is the difference between sucking a cock for $50 and sucking a cock for a promotion at work. None. They are both done by whores - sex for profit. ***** I really don't see how the husband can accept his wife's behavior. She has as a partial excuse the desire for another child. Is this the hook for the husband? ***** Great start to the story.
Interesting start to cliched premise
Celt, the writing in this is good and you have really made Charlie and Layla come to life. I like how you show the conflicts in Layla between her career ambitions and her family. I particularly like the fact that she is considering the offer to allow her to convince her husband to let her have a second child (although the problem with that is that to have the second child she would have have to leave work for another year, a factor that might affect her potential for getting the job).
But, the cliche in this story is the sexual harassment inherent if the sex for a promotion premise with the wife hiding it from her husband. While I am sure that it happens in real life, it's almost as cliched as the blackmail scenario. My major problem with the scenario is the stupidity of both Layla and Clayton.
By refusing to confide in Charlie, Layla is expressing a subconscious opinion of him. She knows how intuitive he is, why not ask for his help in figuring out a way to get back at Clayton? As for Clayton, just by making this offer (and then giving her time to "think it over"), he is opening himself up for a world of hurt. It wouldn't be hard for Layla to set him up to get evidence of the sexual harassment which would open both Clayton and the firm up to a major lawsuit, not to mention a divorce for Clayton.
My only thought is that, since you expressed an affection for the wife, you intend a twist to this story. I would not be surprised of this turns into a story where Layla comes to her senses and went to the hotel just to pull a reverse sting on Clayton to get him to incriminate himself. Otherwise, with the character of Charlie the way you wrote him, all I forsee is misery and heartbreak.
Look forward to the next installment
Another welcome Celt Tale
I love your stories and you are one of the few really talented authors who seem to still regularly submit cheating wives tales. Most of your peers have slowed down, quit submitting, or write in other categories. It seems there are always a group of women haters who want every cheater to be burned at the stake or something and they are the first to submit public comments and spew their poison when a new story is posted. I would guess someone like yourself would be used to it but it must be hard on the new authors. One little nitpick: they have such a large combined income and she was driving a 9 year old car until last year? Thanks for all the hours of entertainment.
Yet another
of my favorite authors returns with another great story.
I'm so glad to see stories being posted by authors that can make stories in this category bearable. Ohio and DGHear have all recently posted and now thecelt returns, this is going to be good.
another story of a really dumb cheater
Overall the story is great, and I really do like Charlie. Unfortunately, its rather obvious that the writer is living in a cliche world. Layla could have guaranteed the promotion and a major settlement without removing a single article of clothing just by telling the HR people are her company about Carson's comments to her. The company would be in an instant Catch-22. If they do anything to Layla, they eat a multi-million dollar settlement. If they fail to promote her, she can claim retaliaton, and again its a multi-million dollar settlement. Carson is done at the company no matter what if she reports it. So why would this intelligent woman not start screaming about it.**********
THe days of "have sex or be fired" are long over, in today's business world, it doesn't happy muchb because HR fears lawyers, since they burnder of proof is on the company to demonstrate that they not only were not aware, but that they so actively shut down sexual predators that no man would dare within their company. Advertising and Sales rarely manage to prove that.
Jake Monroe
Will he turn out to be the father of the little girl? She is 4, 5 years ago Layla cheated with Jake. A nice guy like Charlie gets screwed. But we wouldn't read stories about about faithful spouses would we?
Bill
Weak story
By the way, how old is their daughter? 4 or 6?
Very interesting start of a consequence story
I really wanted to make this a Consequences story but I didn't have the heart to do it. Neither Charlie nor Layla meet the requirements. I loved both characters and couldn't do that to them.
I like your work very much so the above listed forward was not a deterrent for me. I must say how you are going to make Layla a character to behold in admiration or even likeability is beyond me. She is not in love with Charlie she is in love with whatever it is that makes her happy.She will sleep with someone because she wants and can make as many and varied excuses to herself. It is basic she would show her love and respect for her husband by kicking the arsehole boss out of the office. She wouldn’t have to even consider the offer if she was as intelligent as we are told she is and supposedly so in love with her husband. This is a woman who feels she can spin anything to an outcome she can live with.Looking forward to how you put these two happily back together. What is it others always say, you sure dug a deep hole in this plot line.This was very good entertainment Thank youPT
laaaaaaay-la, ya got me on ma knees...
Thecelt is one of this site's best and most experienced writers, so there really isn't any excuse for him to put out tripe like this. He likes Layla's character? Why? She's a conniving, self-centered whore, who is dumb as a rock. And this opinion is coming from someone who usually gives put-upon wives like this a break. Maybe I'm just getting cranky these days, but I just don't see any redeeming values in this woman. She's weak-willed to a fault: all it takes to get her in bed is for an alpha male to get her drunk or bully her with a bogus blackmail threat. And Carson's proposal is so cliched and so wrong that it's laughable. As others have said, there is no such thing any more as he said-she said in the corporate world where sexual harassment is concerned. The mere accusation of such impropriety is enough to launch a full-scale investigation and initiate a lawsuit. Especially since the company in this case has left itself ridiculously wide open to such a charge by putting a "mentor" over this woman as a condition of her promotion, an act that is overtly sexist on its face. And while Charlie is a sympathetic character to a degree, there are elements to his character that are simply not believable. This guy is so painfully shy that he hardly gets out of the house throughout high school and college, and yet thecelt makes him a salesman? As someone who has fought chronic shyness all his life, I can tell you that ain't happening. Someone with that level of shyness can, with a great deal of effort, become somewhat productive in a public setting, but not in a field where one has to get out and hustle strangers for business. Of course, without that plot device, Charlie isn't in the elevator to meet Layla in the first place. And, too, why in the hell is he the one leaving the family home? Why isn't the cheating wife the one who is being escorted to a motel, instead of being left home to care for his child. Assuming, of course, she is his child, and it should be his first order of business to find out through a DNA match whether she is, in fact, his child. I'm sorry, but I'm simply not buying this story, but because of the quality of the writing, it is a readable story, and for that he gets 50. Still, I think thecelt should spare us further chapters. We all know what's going to happen. Charlie's going to get lonely, Layla's going to lure him back into the marriage with promises that she'll never do it again, Carson's going to slither away scot-free and they're all going to live happily ever after. Until the next time Layla encounters a strong-willed man (obviously not Charlie) who pressures her into a compromising position. Very disappointing.
Another great story by thecelt
Like most of the other readers, I am a big fan of thecelt and am looking forward to chapter 02. I am a little shocked at the venomous comments of your readers who want Layla crucified .In your story ,she does seem to have made an incredibly stupid decision and as many have said ,in this day and age, you would think Layla would have boss up on sexual harassment charges and make sure he loses any retirement bnefits. If I read your story correctly, Layla spent one day with letcherous boss in hotel room. How did Charlie, intuitive as he may be, know time ,place etc to have pictures taken and printed of her one time tryst? Sad story so far. I hope thecelt bails Layla out of her misery.
60 year old George
well she may need the extra money
now she will have a child to support by herself and a house to pay for and dont forget food and clothing and utilities ...oh well now she will have the time to find that someone to give her that other kid she wants ....oops lol hope she can get him to pay child support ..if i was charlie i wouldnt for christine ...shoot id quit my job first ...he should take as much money from there accts as he can and quit his job and take a job as say a night watchman ...then if she wants support all layla will get is not much ....then he can do his own bussiness and really make the money just hide it under the table ...its a business but hes not making money the corporation is ...him hes just a night watchman that makes minimum wage ....sorry dear you can have christine and yes ill pay what is it since you make so much more than i ill pay say 5000 dollars a week as that is over 17 percent of my wages ....shoot he can rent a flea bag room and again have a nice house under the corp he owns that is not in his name but the bussiness ...id teach the bitch a lesson ...if she wants another kid hope carson can pay for it along with his family ...shoot i think she should go for the gold and get pregnant then sue him for chile support then he can get divorced and live with her and pay for both kids
what a stupid bitch
Hmmm
You liked both characters? Did you go crazy? What is there to like about that stupid whore, i wouldn't go far if i said she is far worse than some other women in your consequences stories. As it was already said more than once i will only repeat it again she didn't even need a recording device to crush that idiot of a boss, all she needed to do was say a word and he would be history. All in all this means only one, that she indeed wanted the affair not just for the money, or promotion or whatever...
If Charlie will take her back he will be as "likable" as her, but thats your decision. As one of your fans i am just sad you wrote this, next time please spare us.
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There really is nothing to like about layla. she doesn't care about charlie. okay she claims it's so they can get all the money they want, well sorry but is it really worth giving up someone you love? and I agree with every body else she should have talked to her husband and told Carson to sling his hook the scary thing is she believes in the 'NO harm No foul' idea well i'm just glad charlie found out of course what you plan to do with chapter two is up to you but when somebody does this sort of thing for money or promotion what does that make her?. I do hope that charlie get's custody of the child (if it's his) and then leaves the ex wife to fend for her self in her new job that she worked so hard for.
Why?
Old man, time to give it up.
I like Jack Straw's opening Lines of Critique
laaaaaaay-la, ya got me on ma knees...
06/13/08 by jack_straw
Thecelt is one of this site's best and most experienced writers, so there really isn't any excuse for him to put out tripe like this. He likes Layla's character? Why? She's a conniving, self-centered whore, who is dumb as a rock.
"Dumb as a rock" is the underlined phrase here! LOL
But we don't hate --- or even just DISLIKE --- people simply because they are dumb as a rock, do we? No... We dislike/hate people because they ARE CALCULATED and due to their calculated stupidity, they UNDER-ESTIMATE us/others, or those who love them.
But even than just under-estimation:
Layla picked her nose and drop it in her husband's drink; wiped her ass and her lover's, okay, her FUCKERS' asses and SHOOK little crumbs into her husband's drink and soup, SAYING, "If he doesn't know, it won't hurt him. I am doing this because I MUST, even I know it is a dark, shameful, and terrible thing to do to someone I profess to love and cherish... Why must I? Well, because SOMEONE or others tell me if I don't put shit in my husband's drinks and soups, I won't get to go places, do things with them, with others... So even if I put bugger and little amounts of shit in my husband's dishes, SO LONG AS HE DOESN'T KNOW, it won't hurt him."
"I will beg for mercy and undying love, when and IF I am caught; but since I don't plan to get caught, since these are one-time things, I don't think I am going to be needing to think about begging for mercy..."
Such are the character traits of people we hate/dislike; NOT simply that they are dumb as rock! LOL
hreats tory fuck Ass w/o a name
keep writing
Has me stumped!
The Celt is always very good...that is why this story is inexplicable. Celt's opening comments, when taken against the story, just do not make sense. Layla is, as Jack Straw says, a real piece of work. She is self absorbed, stupid, grotesquely immoral, and an out-and-out whore. How in the hell can the Celt like her?
Oh, wait a minute...Celt has senile dementia. No, I don't think so. His writing is too lucid. Then what? Maybe he intends to throw us a curve and find a way to actually have Layla and her lover suffer the consequences after all.
Charlie would meet a new woman, who was really worth his efforts to love, and find new peace for the rest of his life. No!!! Not likely given the Celt's opening comments.
Well, it looks like the predictable ending suggested by Jack Straw. More's the pity!
Jack straw said it quite well
What is there about the Layla celt has shown us that anyone could possibly like?
What Deus Ex Machina will celt lay on us to vindicate his position on her likeability?
This woman is as much a brain dead slut as any we are likely to see in a LW story. She cheats with her eyes wide open and justifies it to herself.
Charlie will be well rid of her.
I ask again, what could there possibly be about her that celt likes so much??
Patients people
There is no doubt in my mind that thecelt knows what he is doing and this story will unfold in future chapter(s).
With this chapter I believe he is developing characters and all will be made clear soon. As I've said in the past there aren't many writers that can pull off stories in this category but the Celt is one that can. Keep up the good work Celt.
Not up to your standard
There is only one way that you could possibly write the woman's role in this story and think that there is something redeeming about her... you have to be an extremely sexist man. The woman is disgusting, and stupid. Once the guy made his little speech she owned his fucking ass! In real life, one phone call and his retirement is out the window... one phone call to his wife, and his life is over... and unless you want us to beleive that he is a moron... we all know that in REAL life this fucking bullshit doesn't happen this way because no matter how much us guys may want to prey on someone, we're not that fucking stupid! Can't you guys think of something more orginal than prostituting a woman over her job... I mean... has any one in the history of this site EVER known of this happening with ANYONE? The answer is NO!
Well put together
This time we at least have seen the whole process leading up
to the event and know what went off the axis. For me this continues a strong candidate for Consequences:Layla. No
redeeming qualities in her. Now Charles is great!
A (late) thought...
I'm coming to the conversation a bit late (August '08), and I've so far only read part 1, but I believe the basis for Layla's "likeability" is best summed up in this line: "She paid the girl, sent her out the back and watched until she made it into her own home..." However misguided, Layla is a worthwhile, caring person.
A woman that delibratly choses adultry,,,,,
and you don't have the heart but to let her betray her husband???? Your values are something else.
its well written
if that bitch was my wife and i found her cheating once, it would be possible i might take her back.(maybe) if i found her cheating a second time her ass is on the first train to imfucked town.(she would NOT be happy) wouldnt be any forgiveness after that, no damn way. i think its an interesting story so far though. i was hoping it was going to be a good story til i read where carson wasnt the first time she cheated on her husband. to be honest im not sure how i like the layla character now. she just seems like a stupid slut! if your going to be a slut at least have some morals and only be a slut to your husband or boyfriend.
Good Read.
Nothing different or exciting, but still so far a good start. Thanks for sharing.
Decent Start
I hope she's happy. She fucked up her loving home. I'll continue...
Just another greedy selfish cunt
She has no morals. If she did she would have told Carson to go fuck himself, but she wants some strange and uses any excuse to convince herself. That's no loving wife just a selfish woman who wants everything and doesn't care who it hurts. Hope Charlie has the balls to dump her.
I'm not hopeful
I'm not hopeful of a happy ending in this one. Instead I think (what with so many more chapters ahead) that it will end with Charlie forgiving her and taking this selfish bitch back. She can rationalize anything to her advantage. Already a cheater and planning more. By the way, how does she get all those contacts signed by all those men anyway. I know I'll regret it if I follow it all the way to the end. I just know it.
Loved it
Well written and engaging. Five stars.
She's Stupid
First of all, they DON'T need the money.
Second, what makes her think that she can trust him? Anyone that would threaten someone for sex isn't exactly trustworthy. He could STILL put in a bad word in revenge for her earlier rejections.
Third, is her work so invisible that his word overpowers what others can see?
slut, stupid and/or both?
I would dump her ass MORE for her stupidity. THEN, for her whorish behavior. In fact, she is WORSE than a whore because at least a whore is honest about her profession and lifestyle. THIS bitch is PRETENDING to be straight and aboveboard while playing the whore and pretending that it's ALL for hubby and daughter and future child. I could not remain married to her and wondering what her next idiotic move will be! What a SLUT, CUNT, WHORE!
I don't have to read any farther. BTB!
A very nice start.
I think I have read something similar, but the wife and the wolf worked for the same law firm.
the writing is very strong
but I hate Carla so I gave it 1*. Betrayal deserves consequences. Charlie didn't deserve the betrayal.
Thoughts
“his degree was in fine arts like most others.” – Huh? Minor point, but I think you meant “Liberal Arts”, and even THEN I’m not sure it’s “most others”, just that it is a common degree for those with no particular program of study.
"One last thing Layla. You know that the choices you make will have consequences, so before you decide anything, think about that. I'll say no more except that I love you, my wife, and I will trust you to do the right thing." – So she has fair warning that he is already suspicious, and that there will be consequences for her choices, so for her to go ahead and cheat anyway she has no reason to be surprised by his actions.
I’m not sure I understand – she was PROMISED the promotion if she “kept up the good work.” SO why does she need Carson’s recommendation? And isn’t he awfully young for an early retirement?
If her good work has already been recognized, why would HIS word be so powerful as to warrant a DEMOTION? She should have a hidden recorder ready for their next conversation!
Why would she trust such a slimeball to keep his word? Any man who would make such a threat is fully capable of taking advantage of her, then figuratively screwing her after literally screwing her!
She got away with it with Jake because it was spur of the moment and there wasn’t the build-up with Carson that raised Charlie’s suspicions.
Cheating Slut
When your a cheater you can always find an excuse or a justication to cheat.
Really don't like Layla
What a controlling, manipulative cheating whore.
She is literally a whore, fucking for a promotion.
Fun read.
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