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Lost Underwear

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/13/08

a bit quick

and a bit to big jumps. kind of hard to get into the story, leaving out a lot of details how it came so far.

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by Anonymous06/16/08

Hard to follow

Even after I read the story, I didn't know what I read. It was very hard to get much out of it.

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by 49greg05/10/13

Interesting

I liked it. Good story line and kept my interest. Felt sorry for he girl but that's the point of the story.

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