Falling Into Darkness Ch. 10

Love it!!!

Can't wait for more! These characters are absolutely wonderful!

Damn cliffhangers...

I can honestly say I've never been more anxiously awaiting a chapter as I was this one. Just please keep that muse of yours on a short leash. I'm dying for the next chapter!

Keep it Coming!

i love this story line and ive honestly been waiting for this next chapter like forever, keep the muse happening and bring the rest on....

Sated...or NOT

I'm thinking of starting a cult in your name.
We can have T-Shirts.
YOU POSTED SO QUICKLY!!!

As always....

NEVER a disappointment. You're story is beyond amazing.
Thank you for spoiling us with a new chapter so quickly.




I can't wait for the next chapter, hope you'll update soon!

Loving It!!

I can't wait until the next chapter, so please update soon.

Oh my God!

Elianna, your writing is so good that when I read it I can see it all so well, like I'm in the story too, watching and waiting....for the next chapter :).

Yep

Another excellent chapter.

Brilliant

Your writing it superb,nevr a let down. PJ xx

nicely done

entertaining as always

Wonderful

Great read love it.

That was great

I can't wait for the next chapter...I hope you'll be churning it out here soon....

Beautiful

I found your story a couple days ago and I am totally addicted. Like another person wrote that when reading your story everything fades away and I am sitting like a fly on the wall so involved with the story. Characters are wonderful and so complex, Anna is beautiful and Cael very handsome. I was wondering though could you do a pronuciation with his name, I am thinking like Kale, but that's probably not correct.

Thanks for sharing this brilliant story with us.

Aghhhhhhhhhhh

What a cliffhanger! Thank you for giving us this great story. Waiting impatiently for more.

Amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is an amazing story. I can wait for the next chapter!!!

great one

i'm glad for more.. but now I want more hope you get to add more soon I love this story soo much I just wish he shared his blood with her..:P anyways great story can't wait for more...

Mind Blowing!!!

Ever read Kresley Cole's IAD series? Your writing style are very similar to hers. Heroes and heroines sexy and gorgeous as hell and brave too. And you do have storyline my dear girl! I finish your series in one sitting and am waiting for more, MORE! MORE!

THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Eli thank you once again you made my day but... damn it did you have to stop there??? I was like "OMG OMG OMG..." and then you stopped... my heart jumped out of my chest!!! Dear Eli u will be the death of me!

Well Done!

Great chapter again! But AHHHHHH!!! You can't leave it there. :)

brilliant

so good, can't wait till the next chapter!! Please make it soon! xxx

Thank you

thank you once again :)

you could write a book!

you could get this published if you spiffed it up a bit...great work, keep going!!!

awesome

You post regularly...I love you.

Breathtaking

"The Little One" will die? Say it isn't so... Superb writing!!!

Great!!!!

oh my gosh....the suspense is going to kill me....haven't gotten any decent work in lately...too caught up with this story :)Can't wait for the next installment..is Cael going to make Anna a vampire??? I would like to read more about Kieran, he's an interesting character. Keep it up Elianna.

More! More!

Fabulous writing and storyline. Love the characters! Please write soon!

Magnificent

This is an amazing story!!! I don’t want to rush your fabulous writing but WRITE FASTER!!! Please :)!

You are killing me ever so slowly...

The suspense is killing me! Please update soon, you left off at such a cliff hanger! Looking forward to your next update.

wow

unbeliveable one of the best series i have read on this site yet

And you just started writing????

Clever, emotional, creative, intelligent, suspenseful, romantic and oh so sensual without being overtly sexual. Your way of telling the story invites the reader to feel for this rich assortment of charcters...just an excellent story. If this were a book, it would be a best seller.
Well done.

Excellent!

Very good character development and detailing. Looking forward to the concluding submission(s). :)

Awesome as always!!

Great chapter. I do hate the suspence, and waiting though. Enjoy your vacation.

Begging for more

Wow. Incredible. Pulled in immediately and dying for more!

Elianna,

You are amazing. I love you so so much. Thanks for this amazing work of fiction!

Amazing

Beautifully written, i love it especially when he feeds from her.. so sexual.. makes me wish i had a vampire friend of my own!!

amazing story but...

how does anna know it was James Bradford who raped her lol ??? anyway good story

Love it!

I read a lot and you should try to get get published through ebooks which may seg-way to the big times! You're awesome and I hope you continue to write!

AWESOME

best story ever !

oh the suspense....

i can not wait for the next chapter, you are an awesome writer

Excellent

I truly believe that you should published this story, You are a supreb writer.

Can't stop reading this

It is truly excellent work. I echo the others here and hope you have published work elsewhere. This story would stand on it's own even without the erotica.

Bradford...?

First off I want to say congradulations on such a superb story. I am well and truly addicted. However, there is one thing that is bothering me: how does Anna know Bradford's name?
I don't know maybe I've missed something but it's just a thought. Did she learn it when he asked her out or something?
All the best x

Really liked this chap

Except for the beginning paragraphs in which she is supposed to be having a mild temper tantrum, I really liked this chapter. The first paragraphs seem awkward, jumbled, and forced, and Anna's anger comes off as a little 'played' or over dramatic and fake.

However, I like the rest of the chapter, from the point where Alexander says:

' "Their attempts to capture you sent you into hysteria and you fought like a wildcat to get away. However Kieran is a powerful vampire and in the end, after quite a struggle, he restrained you. That's when I found you..." '

to the end.

The witty, sassy characteristics you've given Anna are great and I enjoy those exchanges with Darian and later with Cael. You also do a really great job with the love-making scenes.

It's 5am, I know I should go to sleep but I just can't stop reading this. You are an absolutely amazing writer!

awesom

keep writing, you have a special gift.

So damn sexy

Ooh your sex scenes are absolutely delicious and all the emotions you have in your story great job. I must say your sex scenes put my mind and body in very naughty places lol great job

LOVING IT!!!!!!!

I wondered after chap 9 how could it get any better and after reading chapter 10 i tot wanted to hit myself cuz it jus got great :)
xoxo
Aria

Sex scenes = WOW

You really write beautifully and the images that you put into my head....well we all know the outcome of those ;)

Please

Enough with the tiny hands you make her sound like she's a dwarf or a child.

Damnn stiky hand..wait..gotta clean keyboard...

...sex good..story good...you good...universe..hell still sticky..yada,yada,ya..