All Comments on 'On-the-Side Pleasure'

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BeautifulKisserBeautifulKisseralmost 16 years ago
Very nice story

This was a very nice story. Your writing in general is quite exciting, and this one is no exception.

<br/><br/>If I were to nitpick, I'd say it might be a bit rushed (the writing -- obviously the story is rushed!) and the presence of Eldora is slightly interruptive without being titillating (yet?).

<br/><br/>I loved it! Good work, as always. It's AWESOME to see you back!

don87654don87654almost 16 years ago
Baby making

He had better come and see her, she will be having his baby this time.

don87654don87654almost 15 years ago
Baby Making...

With him seeding her fertile valley, he had better go and see her, to make more siblings for this first baby with his very accomodating seeds and her fertility.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
I liked it---5*****

Thanks for writing;

tom anon

jkthekatjkthekatover 11 years ago
loved all of it !!!

!!!!!

disturbedhrtdisturbedhrtalmost 11 years ago
still onecof the best

Despite the complainers and the haters x-factor is still one of the best authors on this site wish he would release more

Lisabug1021Lisabug1021almost 8 years ago
Sexy story

Loved seeing more of the man's desire but he still needs more dialogue while he's having sex with wife's friend. Great job nonetheless

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