All Comments on 'Red vs Wolfe Ch. 03'

I LOVE IT! I just wish it was slightly longer than this, I know you have your personal problems but hey...what is a girl suppose to do lol

It was great and now I really can't wait for the next chapter, i'm wondering how he is going to 'woo' her in, etc... this should be very interesting lol

I am loving this story!!! please hurry with the rest!!!!

Hi Little_Miss_J, this is a great story and I look forward to more chapters. But, I think you could benefit from an editor's help or at least someone to proof read your work before submission. It is disconcerting to have to figure out what you intend with the grammar errors etc. It could be so much more fun to read. Good luck, I'll be watching for more great stuff from you.

but I would also love some longer chapters. Don't get me wrong, we're lucky to get good stories for free and I definitely appreciate it, but it seems like just when you're really settling in to the chapter it's over. Just a suggestion. Keep on writing!

Love where the story is going, but would also love some chapters that are a little longer. Your killing us with anticipation :)

waiting to see what happens next to Red and the Wolfe!

He sounds yummy.

I like the story line and can't wait for the next chapter! Keep writing...

Enjoying the story, but you REALLY need to get an editor to help with grammar. But bear in mind I wouldn't bother commentong if I didn't enjoy the story!