Nicely described -- both the atmosphere and the internal feelings. I also liked the way you wove present and memory together. I could feel the heat, but also the shame. Good job. Give us more! What happens next?
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Well done
Nicely described -- both the atmosphere and the internal feelings. I also liked the way you wove present and memory together. I could feel the heat, but also the shame. Good job. Give us more! What happens next?
wow!
Very creative... I loved it!!
where is the rest?
i TOTALLY loved thisone, but need to know, will we hear any more? i want to know more....
great story
I loved the story but found the typos a bit distracting. I hope you write more.
made me hot and wet great story.
excellent
an excellent story, would like to read more!
Please..........
Hot and shameful and to short for this girls wants.
Please write more.
oh my
I hope there is more to this story.
Don't end it there!
There has to be more! Great story, please don't end it yet.
Please continue this story its a great story and can only be made better with each part written!!!!
Please continue
Please continue would love to see where this story go's
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