thing a wife could say to her husband. Your cock is to small to be considered real! Divorce the bitch now and save a lot of money and time. She has all the making of a professional call girl.
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Anonymous06/15/08
he should have known
hasn't she been fucking around if she thought of him the way she says. Next step for her is to tell him she wants other men again but with his consent. He could have known by her own admission that she really was a slut, settling for security. Or is it just a game, a mind game and nothing else ?? Of course, her blunt statements and the disrespect and contempt are clearly expressed. So, good bye marriage??
G.Belgium
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Anonymous06/15/08
Fantastic Story!
Loved it - direct, basic, and yet the dialogue and tone were perfect. Powerfully erotic. Look forward to more!
I agree with other readers. This wife does not love her husband if she can behave in the way portrayed. He can get the humiliation he craves (in fantasy?) from a professional dom, who in the long run would cost him a lot less. I'm betting chapter 2, if there is one, will involve cuckolding, creampies, and maybe some subbie training. I have difficulty understanding the eroticism of this scenario, but different strokes for different folks.
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Anonymous06/15/08
You either love or loathe this kind of story
Or not. What she says to him is monstrous if she's supposed to care at all about him. On the other hand, he did pretty much ask for it...
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Anonymous06/16/08
Theme, disturbing; execution, great.
Nicely written story. Theme did not appeal, but I shall gladly read the next chapter or any other work you might give to us. thanks!
Very good story. Who are these readers who criticize the theme and content of the story, and not its structure, prose, delivery, or mechanics? That's like a person who hates horror forcing himself to read a Stephen King novel and then complaining that it's horror. What idiots!
never order something without reading the small type.
you might avoid a big surprise.
loved the story, thanks.
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Anonymous06/16/08
Loved It!!
I loved it! Great story! I look forward to reading more. I love the theme and humiliation of the story. Maybe next time he will find her a young hung stud? Can't wait for more.
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Anonymous08/22/08
Excellent story
Well done in all facets. Look forward to follow up.
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Anonymous10/19/08
Excellent Climax
I loved the story and thought it led up to a great ending. I thought the last paragraph set up a great sequel and can't wait to read it. I am not sure if having her goes to work and tell her friends of the size differentiation which could lead to the girls over and dropping the size differentiation and even have the wife yanking the guy’s pants down to show the smallness to humiliate. The other of course is her acting on the size or lack of home size hubby.
He wanted to be nice and all of a sudden the rules of the marriage just got changed. Hope you enjoy the new ones. His unintentional purchase is going to have long term consequences.
She is playing him like a harp. I guess she figures 7 years was long enough to be monogamous especially if she can get him to agree to it. So 'loving wife' that she is after getting off she rebuffs his attempt to have sex with her. After all she won't want to 'spoil' the glow she is feeling. And wasn't that last comment a knife in the back. Yup, no good deed goes unpunished.
Unlike her more playful teasing in "The Paper Slip", Liz's dialogue here is less believable and has a cruel streak running through it -- this has far less to do with loveplay than it has with humiliating her husband.
but he seems to enjoy it. His wife seems to know how to be dominant (she jumped in with both feet with her comment about "real" cocks) and he seems to be carefully exploring his submissiveness. Does she love him enough to continue respecting him even though he is submissive? How submissive is he? How much humiliation is OK? It would take another chapter for us to find out.
RoughDraft is an excellent drafter of painful erotic anecdotes. The tension just keeps building and building! I wish he would publish much more often. I especially like what he makes his Sweetie character Liz do to her physically unimpressive Hubby. 'Like' is probably the WRONG word! She infuriates me!!!
I love the way you write, how you increase the level of exciting throughout the story!!! 5 stars!!!
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Anonymous01/14/15
Terrific story !!
Great build up. Great teasing nature to the story. Would like a second chapter. Thank you.
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Anonymous07/12/16
Well, that tells me where my place is...
Hearing those words crystallized my thinking in an instant. I knew what would happen, where this would all lead to. Knowledge galvanized me into action.
As I climbed energentically from the bed, my wife looked at me. "What's this all about?"
"Choices." I said over my shoulder as I walked from the room. "I've realized that our marriage has come to a crossroads."
"Wait, what do you mean?" I heard drift up the hall as I walked to the garage and pulled the door open.
She was still lying in bed with a mystified look on her face as I came back in with our two largest suitcases.
"Like I said, I realized that we've reached a place where we need to make choices. For you, the choices are simple. Your choice is either your big dicks, or you husband. The two are pretty much mutually exclusive. For me, the choice is whether I'm willing to allow you to continue to humiliate, degrade, and refuse me, or whether I'm going to retain a shred of self-respect and demand you be a loving wife to me in all ways."
She gaped at me, doing a passable imitation of a goldfish.
"The real question is, what am I going to put into these suitcases? Your toy collection, so it can go to the dump? Or your clothes, so you can go satisfy your need for a, how did you say it, 'real cock'?"
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Anonymous11/26/16
Dildo
He should have read the size measurements of the dildo before he ordered it.then shouldn't have gotthe wrong idea.
English
Isnt that the most betraying and disrespectful
thing a wife could say to her husband. Your cock is to small to be considered real! Divorce the bitch now and save a lot of money and time. She has all the making of a professional call girl.
he should have known
hasn't she been fucking around if she thought of him the way she says. Next step for her is to tell him she wants other men again but with his consent. He could have known by her own admission that she really was a slut, settling for security. Or is it just a game, a mind game and nothing else ?? Of course, her blunt statements and the disrespect and contempt are clearly expressed. So, good bye marriage??
G.Belgium
Fantastic Story!
Loved it - direct, basic, and yet the dialogue and tone were perfect. Powerfully erotic. Look forward to more!
Horrifying!
I would not want to see the rest of their life but this
portrait was vivid.
There is nothing to suggest she was only kidding.
I agree with other readers. This wife does not love her husband if she can behave in the way portrayed. He can get the humiliation he craves (in fantasy?) from a professional dom, who in the long run would cost him a lot less. I'm betting chapter 2, if there is one, will involve cuckolding, creampies, and maybe some subbie training. I have difficulty understanding the eroticism of this scenario, but different strokes for different folks.
You either love or loathe this kind of story
Or not. What she says to him is monstrous if she's supposed to care at all about him. On the other hand, he did pretty much ask for it...
Theme, disturbing; execution, great.
Nicely written story. Theme did not appeal, but I shall gladly read the next chapter or any other work you might give to us. thanks!
Very Good
Very good story. Who are these readers who criticize the theme and content of the story, and not its structure, prose, delivery, or mechanics? That's like a person who hates horror forcing himself to read a Stephen King novel and then complaining that it's horror. What idiots!
only goes to show
never order something without reading the small type.
you might avoid a big surprise.
loved the story, thanks.
Loved It!!
I loved it! Great story! I look forward to reading more. I love the theme and humiliation of the story. Maybe next time he will find her a young hung stud? Can't wait for more.
Excellent story
Well done in all facets. Look forward to follow up.
Excellent Climax
I loved the story and thought it led up to a great ending. I thought the last paragraph set up a great sequel and can't wait to read it. I am not sure if having her goes to work and tell her friends of the size differentiation which could lead to the girls over and dropping the size differentiation and even have the wife yanking the guy’s pants down to show the smallness to humiliate. The other of course is her acting on the size or lack of home size hubby.
No good deed goes unpunished
He wanted to be nice and all of a sudden the rules of the marriage just got changed. Hope you enjoy the new ones. His unintentional purchase is going to have long term consequences.
She is playing him like a harp. I guess she figures 7 years was long enough to be monogamous especially if she can get him to agree to it. So 'loving wife' that she is after getting off she rebuffs his attempt to have sex with her. After all she won't want to 'spoil' the glow she is feeling. And wasn't that last comment a knife in the back. Yup, no good deed goes unpunished.
Thanks for sharing.
Too harsh
Unlike her more playful teasing in "The Paper Slip", Liz's dialogue here is less believable and has a cruel streak running through it -- this has far less to do with loveplay than it has with humiliating her husband.
Not my thing ...
but he seems to enjoy it. His wife seems to know how to be dominant (she jumped in with both feet with her comment about "real" cocks) and he seems to be carefully exploring his submissiveness. Does she love him enough to continue respecting him even though he is submissive? How submissive is he? How much humiliation is OK? It would take another chapter for us to find out.
Great story
Fantastic story! I hope there is more to come!
Great build-up
RoughDraft is an excellent drafter of painful erotic anecdotes. The tension just keeps building and building! I wish he would publish much more often. I especially like what he makes his Sweetie character Liz do to her physically unimpressive Hubby. 'Like' is probably the WRONG word! She infuriates me!!!
5*
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!
Excellent story!!!
I love the way you write, how you increase the level of exciting throughout the story!!! 5 stars!!!
Terrific story !!
Great build up. Great teasing nature to the story. Would like a second chapter. Thank you.
Well, that tells me where my place is...
Hearing those words crystallized my thinking in an instant. I knew what would happen, where this would all lead to. Knowledge galvanized me into action.
As I climbed energentically from the bed, my wife looked at me. "What's this all about?"
"Choices." I said over my shoulder as I walked from the room. "I've realized that our marriage has come to a crossroads."
"Wait, what do you mean?" I heard drift up the hall as I walked to the garage and pulled the door open.
She was still lying in bed with a mystified look on her face as I came back in with our two largest suitcases.
"Like I said, I realized that we've reached a place where we need to make choices. For you, the choices are simple. Your choice is either your big dicks, or you husband. The two are pretty much mutually exclusive. For me, the choice is whether I'm willing to allow you to continue to humiliate, degrade, and refuse me, or whether I'm going to retain a shred of self-respect and demand you be a loving wife to me in all ways."
She gaped at me, doing a passable imitation of a goldfish.
"The real question is, what am I going to put into these suitcases? Your toy collection, so it can go to the dump? Or your clothes, so you can go satisfy your need for a, how did you say it, 'real cock'?"
Dildo
He should have read the size measurements of the dildo before he ordered it.then shouldn't have gotthe wrong idea.
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