Life in the Harem Ch. 12

Great story~

I love this series and I can't wait to find out what happens to Calista! Excellent writing, keep up the fantastic work x

Fine work

I think you could fill this story out a bit for an erotic novel. You have really good stuff here. I think it would be interesting to read the transformation from slave to master and how Calista alters... of course finding Lucinda is interesting as well. Getting to know "Master's" business more in depth would be interesting as well... your hints are intriguing. Anyway, fine work. I will be peeking at your other work soon.

oh wow

I really really REALLY like this story. It seems kinda empty to leave it where it is. It leaves people wondering what happens next. Please keep up the wonderful work.

Love the ending...or is it the beginning?

I have been following this series from the beginning...and I have to say the author is excellent...it has everything a good story should have

COOOOL

WOW ! very nice !

Excellent

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story...Please continue

one of the best

this is one of the best stories on literotica. it is well thought out, and the first one to hold my interest for 12 stories! well done!!

it is a truly well thought out and built up story! i love it! keep writing! i can't wait for the next installment !

for fiction... amazing

the scenario to be real is absolutly terrible, with slavery, rape, degrading humans etc! in all fiction though, it is a well written story that i enjoyed reading. :)

Enjoyed

I really enjoyed the story...I stayed up late last night reading as much as I could. I really wanted to get to the end! But since I had to be at work very very early I couldn't finish the story. I couldn't wait to get home tonight to finish reading the last few chapters. Looking forward to reading the last few chapters....Keep it up!

I've pulled the final two acts

If you're looking for Act 2 and Act 3, I've taken them down right now as I'm shopping the entire novel to try to get it published. If you are interested in more details, drop me an email.

I would love to read the rest of Calista's Training & also what happens to Lucinda.

great storie

i have spent the last hour or two reading all 12 chapters and i couldnt seem to stop myself from reading it all i hope that you continue with this story for itis a great holds the reader on edge i cant wait to read more stories by this author and hope there is more for this story line.

Please add another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

D:

More more more more more more more? Please?

More!

I love this, craving for more!

loved it!

I read straight through.... great story! I couldn't put it down. Thanks for sharing!

Needing more

Next chapter? I love the story. WONDERFUL. The best I've read here thus far.

Need more? Send me a message

Send me a message if you wish to read more.

I really enjoyed your heroine and her subtle strengths.This was one of the better stories I have had the pleasure of reading. I look forward to the next installment of this series.

WOW

Absolutely kept me enthralled. Loved this fic and didn't sleep the whole night so that I could read it all.
Would really love you to continue the story, I know it's been awhile.
Thank you so much for the great entertainment!

The End

The end, or not quite eh?

You have kept me awake for a few hours now reading this and oh how I have loved it! It wasn't a story for me to 'get off' on and that's why I thoroughly enjoyed it! I wish to be calista, i wish to find this Master and you took me there so well! My love of reading with my sexual quirks combined, a series I shall read over and over :)

There were some grammatical errors but overall, i think these are easy to overlook ;)

rachx

more?

Please! I have love this story, and I need to know what else happens, I am addicted

Life in the Harem....Very Enjoyable!

Well done. I look forward to more of this story and many others.

Amazing

Loved every chapter !

wonderful

I stayed up all night reading all of it, it was that good. Please don't stop. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Sequel!

Thank you for sharing this story, it was a great read. Sort of a modern Cinderella tale. Please give us a sequel!

morreeee please

Please write more

One word: AMAZING!!

Brilliant story

Just the right amount of action and a great plot ! well done .Can't wait to read about Lucinda getting her just desserts :-)

Keep going!

Can't wait to read more of this!!!

Needs More

Needs an epilogue at least.

There is room for more chapters !

I really enjoyed this story.

I just finished chapter 12 and wanted to say I really enjoyed it and that I hope you continue with it.

stop

It probably was a good place to stop. I thoroughly enjoyed your story, now I suppose it's time to read your others.

Great job!

Please do continue this story! It's one of the best i've ever read!

Great series!!!!

I just finished reading all 12 chapters. Would have loved to find out what happened to Master and Calista but a fantastic ending nevertheless. A job well done. Will now read other submissions from the author.

By the way does anyone know what happened to the author. There has been no submissions for a while now. :(