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Lodge Pool Adventure

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by Cletis06/26/13

Short, but......

Some would be angry at the shortness of your story. Not me. You had something to relate and didn't waste my time with a abundance of unnecessary descriptions. Just enough to fill in around the tale you had to tell. One day, I would love to be the one to walk out on such a moment. I think I would smile and give her a thumbs up as I continued on my way. Thanks for the tale.

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