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I Like Her, Fat Lady

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by normal jean06/16/08

I like

the way you put this poem together and some of the words you have used are terrific. A pleasure it was to read. I hope you continue to post and perhaps pop into the poetry forum for a visit sometimes, we have fun in there ;)

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by WickedEve06/24/08

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Great piece of poetry. I very much enjoyed reading it -- fun and smart!

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by Anonymous08/19/08

Dancer

Hi denise
You make your words dance, just as the fat woman's butt dances as sge sits on top of her man
Gregory

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