All Comments on 'Getting Lucky'

This is a great story that warms the heart and also gives me a nice laugh at the end.<p>

Thank you for continuing to master your craft Mr Wet.<p>

Keep them Coming<p>

lovely, short and sweet. Need I say more? Thanks for writing!

well written but short story. still enjoyed it. looks like he did get 'lucky'.

Thank you

Perfect story! Nice short and too the point. Good girl/bad girl with a guy making the better choice. Pappy, you do have a way with words.

Two new post in such a short time and both winners. Not as much controversy over this one though. LOL

I loved the irony! Your story reminded me of one by budd100 called, What's with These Women? However, his narrator wasn't as lucky as yours.

Boyd

really enjoyable story of two down to earth people and one flirt from man to man person that got her come-uppance.

the Ct. yankee

looking forward to seeing more chapters!!!!

Very nice writing - concise, clever. I agree with previous comments that a Ch. 02 would be appropriate for these two couples...

of Quality. The story hit the spot

Very much looking forward to the next chapter!

A wonderful start with the promise of a truly romantic storyline! Can't wait for the next chapter!

The table has been set for another exceptional glimpse into the mind of Wetapap. Wonderful beginning.

You have the ability to write very good short stories, I hope you will expand to longer stories in the future as I think you definitely have talent.

Don't stop now!

DONT STop!!!!!!!!

Too short; love to read another chapter

Great setup. Great characters. Fun ending. The only weakness is the lack of understanding about why Teresa is not with Chuck.

Really well conceived and executed thanks -

Well conceived and executed thank you -

Took me a moment to sort out that last little joke. Thank you for that. I like tiny little puzzles/jokes inside stories. Like a little present.

Yes, it is much more important to get lucky for life than for a night. Those 'games' that some people play still after all my years irritate the hell out of me. Thank you for this little ditty and life lesson in one.

i liked it. gave it a 5. but i would really like it longer please.

Another story with a good start, but where oh where is the rest of the story?

I really, really like this story. His reaction seems almost identical to how I would react (though I'm much less charming) and I don't find that in many stories. Seems more people are interested in getting lucky for a night rather than life. Great to read this type of story after all the other insanely kinky stuff I normally read, sometimes its nice to just read something about people getting together without the story being about sex.

Excellent story, thanks for writing. I loved the nuances or thought your main character displayed in talking to both girls - in most stories it seems so formulaic. In one of those he'd have gone out with the tramp, had his heart broken, and eventually ended up with the correct one. Here is showed definite maturity in what he did - refreshing. Thanks.

Another good story but on this one I wanted more. After reading your first 2 stories, I can see you like to leave them hanging. It works sometimes but this time I still wanted more. Thank You

this in probably 4 years but well worth reading again. Thank you.

not too short,

just enough to get the point across

I got addicted after reading this. Now I feel unfulfilled!

Seems incompkete

I loved the story. Wish there was more!

I have a feeling this author is going to leave us wishing for more!

A good well told series of events in several peoples lives over a period of a few days ending with a point made. It is not a story.A story has a beginning,middle and ending...Readers are stuck with the middle...To bad,it easily could have been an enjoyable tale.You do express a lot in small amount of writing, but leave a reader hanging...JZK

Lucky for life!!