All Comments on 'Show Me Yours'

by alan_smithee_III

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epiphany65epiphany65almost 16 years ago
Nice

Well-written and intriguing, but far too short. I hope you keep writing and let us know what else happens with the step-siblings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
FYI:

Step-siblings are NOT related in any way, shape or form. I believe they can even marry in SOME states as long as they are not adopted by the opposite parent. IF NOT, who cares?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
excellent

very well writtena nd to the the point love the fact that u started them out with some mutual masturbation keep goin with the story please

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 16 years ago
Good while it lasted...

Short and sweet was almost an understatement...do give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great

Keep going!

tonny13587tonny13587over 11 years ago
Excellent story line.

Worked for me! Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
AWESOME

For Real keep this one goen good start can't wait for ch. 2.

trikietrikieover 11 years ago
WOW

Yeah more please? Shes a hot little minx, he'll have to fuck her soon?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

very good can't wait for ch.2!

trikietrikieover 10 years ago
oh yeah

lets have part two?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Sexy

I have a very tall sexy sister with a big old butt big old tits real perky real sexy lips and boys will we live together in the same house she always walks around with little shorts and little shirts you can see your titties sometimes you ladies on the sofa and just talk to your ass in the air and watching TV sometimes I hide behind your taking my dick I spied on her many time crack in her window and looking at a change I don't know how to do it but I want to touch your ass

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
good story

Please write more on this story its really hot

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 1 year ago

"Absolutely"...you should write a sequel to this...and give us more info on these siblings!!

Five Stars...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

more please

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