too short! haha! Seriously, I absolutely LOVE your story and your writing but I love it too much that all I want is more and more! You have built these characters to where we could actually 'know' them and you're unfolding this story in good time. No jumping around, no rushing, no dragging out. All perfect!! Please keep going Mike! This has definitely become one of my favorite stories yet and you, as one of my favorite writers. :)
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The only complaint I have is...
too short! haha! Seriously, I absolutely LOVE your story and your writing but I love it too much that all I want is more and more! You have built these characters to where we could actually 'know' them and you're unfolding this story in good time. No jumping around, no rushing, no dragging out. All perfect!! Please keep going Mike! This has definitely become one of my favorite stories yet and you, as one of my favorite writers. :)
The Factory has put Quality as more important,,,,,
than quantity!!
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