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Very Nice
Liked it a lot. Thanks for sharing.
Not Bad and not Good
This isn't a bad plot and telling the story through dialogue makes it come alive. However, the dialogue is stilted without the contractions that English speakers generally employ in their conversation. With a bit of polishing, the couls have been superb.
Not consistant for a long term relationship.
I like the writing and the story line right up until the ending. She is just as manipulating as her sleazy boss. That is too big a red flag for a happy ending. But overall an enjoyable read. anon jerry
Its the Drivers fault
Great story, light hearted with a sinister twist, something that I have come to expect from your pen. Don't stop, the enjoyment is there for all to read. Thank you
Ah the devious machinations of woman
When they want what they do not have
A real nice story -
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