by sethp
he wants to kick your ass for stereotyping mechanics! Nice stroke story, no dilly-dallying around to get to the point.
that happens a lot at my shop too, these hot girls don't have enough money to fix their cars and I make trades with them, its a fun job because of the hot girls...
Nice little story, handled with a light touch. But it would be so much better if you would spend the time it takes to clean up the errors in grammar and punctuation.
I enjoyed your story, it was so hot!!! Looking forward to more of this story.
A good story for jacking off. I enjoyed it. The descriptions of the action were hot. I'm saving the story so I can masturbate to it some more.
The thing I enjoy about your stories is that they all have a nice (and hot) build-up as well as backgrounds, but the thing I'm dissapointed with is the lack of details when it gets to the actual sex. With this story it literally only lasted 1 short paragraph, which was kind of anti-climatical. Your grammatical errors are not so serious that they can't be easily overlooked compared with some of the other authors on this site, so I don't understand why ppl keep commenting on it. Keep it up!
top class and i like the description of the mechanic so true lol.
The young lady well she sounds hot but we know nothing about her sweet pussy was it shaved? was it tight? did she ave a neat pussy or were her lips down to the floor?
Loved it anyway!
It pushes me over the edge every time when Jenny straddles her Uncle. Strong feelings of desire wash over me when Uncle Dave firmly asserts that Jenny is going with him and that pushes me over the edge a second time.
You have great story ideas with great buildup but they always end too quickly! good work though....
This story was very good but it should have a sequel also that what happens next.
IT WAS A FORCED FUCK, EVEN IF SHE DID LIKE IT. THAT'S NO WAY TO GET A GOOD FUCK. EVEN FROM YOUR NIECE..........NO THANKS
Might have been better rating f it gave some kind of decent ending, but this was a sad story