by Malkor
OOOO I liked this so far, Now I want to know who is behind it, whats going to happen with Nora....OOO Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it will come quickly lol
I do like this story so far ;) Very interesting. I cant wait to see where this is going to go.
There is nothing here. I read a paragraph then scanned the rest. If you are going to write, add some sexual events and create a story.
I definitely like the story so far. However, posting something so short is just downright annoying to the reader. I look forward to the next submission, but if it's the same length I'd rather just wait until you have something more substantial.
Please end our torment, let the next part be a lot longer, please.
Just when it gets interesting, you leave us hanging. I surely hope you'll continue because it just isn't fair to the reader.
But stop teasing and give longer chapters you... YOU TEASE! Keep writing!
I read yours after you left a comment about mine.
I really like yours as well.
Awaiting the next chapter with interest
I loved the feeling of mystery and uncertainty I got when I, as a reader, knew nothing more than Nora did.
Great stuff!