2nd Affair

Superb quality

This story made my night...

wow

It made me cum

great!

DP is one of my biggest fantasies! Add a black man.. I was in heaven!

definitely one of my fave authors!

really enjoyed it and many others of your stories. it was really good and sex with my boyfriend later that night was great...all thanks to you. keep up the good work!!

This story continues to rock!

I continue to award your stories the highest ratings since they're excellent stoke material and the latest installment of 2nd Affair was seriously hot.

At the same time, I wish, with your obvious writing skills, you'd make your characters a little less subject to her raging hormones and more self reflective. But of course, that would be a different story entirely so its not a fair criticism.

Good writing.

fools they are

they gave you a ""1"".................damn idiots!!!!
very hot story!!!

Very HOTTTT...

It was so Hot a story that I wished I could feel two big and fat cocks pumping into me...mmmmm

Oooooooohhhhhhhhh

You got what it takes when it comes to writing Literotica, I could almost feel the sensations myself.....keep on writing!!

Mike should have been bigger!

Mike should have had a bigger penis than Jason and even with her being wet he would have a hard time entering her.

very fuckin good!!

hey, next time my girlfriend wants a dp with an asian girl...

damn

i really like ur story turned me on bout the blk guy fuckin erin loved the story keep it up.

Only Jason?

Would have been better if in the ending she had become a slut to them both or more.

SOOO HOT

My husband thanks you for this story. It was great. It has always been a fantasy of mine.

story rocked

ur ego shid hav no worries. haters will always try 2 put skilled peoople down. then there r always people who dont no how 2 follow instructions. forget em. story rocks

Like the story

A few typos detract a little from the reading and some real colloquialisms (like "grinded" instead of "ground") crept into the script. However the storyline is still good and the detail is excellent.

A couple of comments: I'm glad you set up the cock sizes as you did. Reality is that not every black cock is bigger than every white cock.

Also Erin must have a raging yeast infection by now and is surely just dying to be fist fucked so someone can scratch that itch from the inside out. Anybody who fucks a woman in the ass and then sticks his cock in her pussy without cleaning up thoroughly doesn't give a damn about the girl. I think he should have just stuck it back in her ass and finished up; the results would have been just as good, maybe better.

Anyway, good writing; keep it up.

So HOTTTT

Made me cum.

UH YES!

I wish i could be erin!

Should not have taken out the roommate!!!!!!!!!!

I liked the story, but the roommate needed to stay, it added extra spice to the story, because it made Jason jealous and Erin liked that and like being with both men.

Hot!!!

Beyond Hot!!!

a night to remember

I wish I could have been erin. Made me wet to read how pleasued she was. All that god cum!!

ATP a BIG NO! NO!

Unless the guys are using condoms Ass to Pussy (ATP)just like Ass To Mouth (ATM)is a big NO! NO! If you really like anal finish that way not in the pussy or the mouth, please give the female some respect and not kill them off with an infection.

Outstanding Story!

One of the best.....keep them coming!

Outstanding Story!

OUTSTANDING STORY! KEEP THEM COMING!

Interesting Story...Great Sex

Great story. I liked the detail. Keep it coming....

Fantastic story

Took me back to the days not so long ago I did this stuff. Just a word to let you know, during a MFM I kept a box of baby wipes handy AND, because I'm a safety girl, we used condoms...so before we went from one place to another it was a simple wipe down switch the rubber and go for it. The baby wipes helped clean up so no one had to run off to the bathroom. Also during a dp one male enters the ass past the head while the other enters the vagina, that way it doesn't hurt so badly or tear the girl..it's all about the awkward positioning thing. Hey I hope it helps. Awesome story however, I look forward to reading more of your stuff! Take care, angelsserenity76

Awesome; All of Them

Can't imagine anyone not loving your stories, unless they are racially uptight. I've not commented on each of the stories I've read, but they sure make me horny and ready to cum.

Keep up the good work :)

Later

GREAT!!!

Loved it. Erin's promise at the end is bull. Once fucked by Mike's black cock, she would want it again and again and again. I'm a white woman and should know - all white women will want more of that black baby seed. Keep it up!

Keep em cumming!

I scan several stories a week to send to my husband and I have found that yours really get him going! Thank you for awesome stories, we both love them! Keep UP the good work!

Great! Great!

I would not mind if my wife cheated on me like that. White cunts (and mouths and arse) should be fucked by black dicks.

i love it

wwapepep heyy bro...if you could mail me all of your stories

here is my e-addd hope for your reply

this is one hell of a story hope im the black guyzzz....i want to fuck that kind of a slut XD

t_t2k7@yahoo.com

hope for your mail....

and more fore sir

Great writing!

Great story. I looked up to read it a 3rd time, thanks. The other Erin ones are good too, all I've read of yours so far

Hm

Only 4 stars because of ass to pussy.

You never, never go direct from ass to pussy. Pussy to ass ok, but not the other way around. Ass without a condom is bad enough but ass to pussy on top of that is a big, huge NO NO.

what the hell is a calve ??? Spell check dude !!!!!

Do you have a hang-up with tiny feet ? Way, way over-used !!!

ummm

It gets a one because it IS a one, douche.

Love your writing, it's real fresh and the right length. I don't aggree with the critic about tiny feet. thanks

I understand why you get a one

you had to be the one with the big dick in your story so you would feel better,I'll give you a 2 because you are not being real we all know that you have a thing against black fucking white women would you have felt different if it had been a black women,write about how they are fucking not because he black fucking a white women.

I gave it a 1 because that is all this story deserves.

The author does write good stories and I gave other series stories all 5s because the stories were outstanding.

However, this story is garbage. First only 1% of guys have cocks 8” or more and perhaps less than 1 in 100,000 have 9” cocks so the odds of roommates both having cocks 8” or more too unlikely. Further, cocks over 8” are the result of genetic defects and that is not sexy. And, 8” or greater cocks don’t shoot sperm, they ooze.

Second Randy, the guy she is engaged to, is obviously retarded and would rather go out and get drunk than to fuck the girl he is engaged to. How likely is it that a very pretty girl that loves sex would get engaged to a low IQ guy that is not interested in sex?

Perhaps that Randy is not interested in sex is the one good thing about the story since Anonymous is correct. Ass to pussy results in infection so she is going to be out of commission for a while as far as having sex while she is being treated for vaginal infection. Since Randy is not interested in sex, I guys her being treated for vaginal infection is no big deal.

Another reason the story deserves a 1 is the story is too perverted to be sexy. And, obviously the girl has psychological problems and stories about girls with mental problems are certainly not sexy. The girls may be sexy until you realize that they are retarded or mentally disturbed.

one yes it was a one ----could've been a five

You just had to give Jason a donimant role.How racist is that?The white dick bigger?The white Jason giving directiom to everybody?

I gave it a one

You write very well but because you show a tendency to be a racist idiot,I gave you a ONE

just a whore

hope she catches a disease

Nah total rubbish

You probably got a "1" rating on your stories because of the need you seem to have for making white blonde women into black loving sluts - TOTAL SHIT - so shit that I will not even rate this story.

Sarah Leather, London England (32yo married fit tanned & toned leather wearing blonde mum of two)
leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

I disagree

I found your story very erotic. I know that Erin should not be cheating on her future husband but my wife has this fantasy about having sex with a black man. And my fantasy is making it happen. So I gave you a 5 because it was well writen, erotic and different. I'll be looking for your othe bi-racial stories.