All Comments on 'In Plane View'

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Ken NitsuaKen Nitsuaalmost 16 years ago
Not bad, but...

I have to say this twist of the sexy stranger who turns out to be a spouse/significant other is getting kind of old (I've used it a couple of times myself). Also, the editing in this one is a bit choppy, particularly toward the end. Be careful of how you introduce characters' names, particularly when they each have a couple of different ones. Best, Ken

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