All Comments on 'Committed Ch. 03'

by FunwithRyleigh

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Not NormalNot Normalalmost 16 years ago
Holy Shit!!!!

I can not believe how hot this story made me. I was completely riled up and on edge after reading this. It made an amazing springboard...

naughtycakesnaughtycakesalmost 16 years ago
Bravo!

What a great ending to the Adena and Logan story! And super fucking hot, too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wettest pussy ever!

my clit is rock hard...I usually cum silently, but this one made me scream. This story was delicious! Also, I've never commented on story before...you're amazing!

foolOfAllFoolsfoolOfAllFoolsover 14 years ago
Amazing.

This was dark and sadistic and hot and exciting. A love story born from a sick and twisted place. Beautiful. Extraordinary writing that drew me in from the start, and drew me deeper and deeper. Gave me a serious hard on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
bravo

they were made for the other.wonderful

details,very erotic.perhaps you could

include more of their adventures?

i adore domestic discipline stories,please

could you dream up more couples who

engage in that genre?...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
oh come on

i so hoped you wouldn't end it in that predictable unrealistic way

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

THIS deserves a sequel! I actually like to come back to re-read it! Hope you write more with this characters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

that ending was so sweet!

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