A great slow build up but then you seemed to lose the suspense and the act was over before you could blink. You need to spend more time developing what went on in the bedroom.
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In a blink of an eye
A great slow build up but then you seemed to lose the suspense and the act was over before you could blink. You need to spend more time developing what went on in the bedroom.
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