All Comments on 'Kismet Ch. 04'

by TE999

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voluptuary_manquevoluptuary_manqueover 15 years ago
Oh, nice!

This is developing splendidly. Well written, that man.

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
So Much More than Nice....

Ummm....very erotic...very sensual....

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 12 years ago
I'm blown away

- that I never posted a comment! I distinctly remember this arousing tale and appreciated the friendship you formed for Afsoon. My apologies again for not recalling this chapter until now! *slaps hands* I am so glad we're moving this story back into the forefront. ~ Red

ausvirgoausvirgoover 7 years ago
An interesting development.

I liked the gentler tone of this chapter.

Some feedback: several times you misspelled Afsoon's and Farisa's names, which I found distracting.

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