by TE999
- that I never posted a comment! I distinctly remember this arousing tale and appreciated the friendship you formed for Afsoon. My apologies again for not recalling this chapter until now! *slaps hands* I am so glad we're moving this story back into the forefront. ~ Red
I liked the gentler tone of this chapter.
Some feedback: several times you misspelled Afsoon's and Farisa's names, which I found distracting.