All Comments on 'Debbie at a College house party'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Slutty, but hot

Nice story, little on the slutty side but that what makes it it hott. Write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
need to proof read

couldn't really get into it as i noticed one or two gramatical errors

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
needs an editor!

would have been a good story but it was hard to read as there were so many errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
This story, ☆☆☆☆+ (4.4/5.0 = 88%) DEBBIE IS A KEEPER!

:-)

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