Good start Shows promise
brilliant story i reckon 9/10, only change i would of liked is...what happened next? longer would of been perfect ^.^
This is such a hot story, a really lighthearted yet sexy entry, it was a little too short, would love a sequel
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not bad
Good start
Shows promise
great story imo
brilliant story i reckon 9/10, only change i would of liked is...what happened next? longer would of been perfect ^.^
Short but sexy
This is such a hot story, a really lighthearted yet sexy entry, it was a little too short, would love a sequel
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