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Excellent Start
I honestly hope you continue this story-line. The sex seemed appropriate for how it happened, and would love to see sequels, as well as a prequel about the exarch.
You have got my attention!
Really enjoyed this well written story, I thought the storyline is quite original and would love to read more.
very good start
Great start! Intriguing premise with characters and a universe full of possibilities. Can't wait to read more. Keep writing, please. Cheers, Ange
needs work
Need to work on your grammar and spelling... Draft in a word processor and then spell and grammar check it. Then submit the final version. Will make for a better read and presents you as a more professional writer.
Moving you to my favorites, dude.
As soon as I remember how to do that, that is...
You write consistently excellent stuff!
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