A touching sad and funny story all at the same time; but most importantly - it felt like real life. And since I know from your poems that you like watching old films, it reminded me of films which show, not unlike this story 'a piece of life', namely, the realism of small regular peoples’ lives. Two classic examples for this genre are two Czech films by Milos Forman, which lovingly show regular people's lives. One film is "The Firemen's Ball", the other: "Closely watched trains". If you get a hold of them I belive you will enjoy their style.
...and being a hooker is probably no different than any other profession. I have no idea whether this is a realistic description of a whore's life, but I found myself rooting for the heroine. Nicely done. Best, Ken
English
Didnt really like it but it was funny.
Are there really women this dumb?
Nice bit of fluff :)
"Are there really women this dumb?"
Look around you, in your office, at your friends, at the mall.
Of course there are.
And there's guys even dumber.
It's all a matter of perspective.
reintroducing: the 'small piece of life' genre
A touching sad and funny story all at the same time; but most importantly - it felt like real life. And since I know from your poems that you like watching old films, it reminded me of films which show, not unlike this story 'a piece of life', namely, the realism of small regular peoples’ lives. Two classic examples for this genre are two Czech films by Milos Forman, which lovingly show regular people's lives. One film is "The Firemen's Ball", the other: "Closely watched trains". If you get a hold of them I belive you will enjoy their style.
Insightful and original
Nice build-up, with unexpected twists and turns of events and in Sabrina's thoughts. And we can only guess the ending...
A very elegant story.
Ya gotta start somewhere...
...and being a hooker is probably no different than any other profession. I have no idea whether this is a realistic description of a whore's life, but I found myself rooting for the heroine. Nicely done. Best, Ken
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