That was one of the better stories on this website. For fast sex, it was well-paced and fluid *no pun..* There was good dialogue and excellent sentence structure. I am still really turned on.
I usually hate the "It was all a dream" cop-out, but you pulled it off perfectly. I actually said "Oh, DAMN!" aloud.
GOod stuff, I'm going to pay attention to your other works.
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Well Done
A very well written story. Nicely erotic and with a fine, surprise ending. Looking forward to more from SquiresBoy.
Great
That was one of the better stories on this website. For fast sex, it was well-paced and fluid *no pun..* There was good dialogue and excellent sentence structure. I am still really turned on.
I usually hate the "It was all a dream" cop-out, but you pulled it off perfectly. I actually said "Oh, DAMN!" aloud.
GOod stuff, I'm going to pay attention to your other works.
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