All Comments on 'Offhand, a Red Car'

So many truths on so many levels; who wants to look like a 70s era VW when their time is up?

two new poems today both with adversands. You know Kooser is a big advocate to abolish the adversand and other signs, symbols and wonders that are short versions of others. I was thinking because of my height, I may also be abolished someday for impersonating someone taller.

Anyway.

Your titles rock da hawse.

I've read it several times and I really think it's just a great piece. I've come to my own conclusions and made a comment on the forum. I'm really getting sex vibes from the poem. Yeah, I know. Of course I would. lol I think it's an erotic poem and you're a hot car who just stalled -- momentarily. :)

With a little bit of cossetting I am sure your engine will run just as well as before!

...Following the line of thought is a hoot. I agree with Eve. A metaphorical giant!