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idk

how you'd take this, but it's really cute ^_^

You write beautifully

I can hear the raw emotion in your words. Reading this was like reading poetry. This was almost more poignant than sexy. It was erotic in that soft-spoken desperate and love-killed weary kind of way.
And those words that you wanted to hear? Those words are the most painful of all.

^_^

This raises a mixture of emotions. Yet I agree with the other post, you write beautifully. I loved it. Minx.

I'm pretty much in awe right now! This story was such a mental fuck! The way he made her hurt while hurting so much himself, trying to make her say those words from her free will while forcing her so erotically... 'twas amazing! Really well done! This was not just another "I own you, so you'll do whatever I say" story, you've turned it into so much more! Anyways, that was awesome!

Interesting

While I am not necessarily into everything you wrote about, I enjoy your writing style.