All Comments on 'A Little Persuasion'

Everything is first-rate here; There really isn't much of a story, but if you're on this site looking for sex, you came to the right place! It was steamy hot and perfectly described from beginning to end, and I hope this author writes more.

Amazing! please carry on or tell us how they met. They were so hottt! please dont keep me waiting im holding my breath.

Please continue this story!!! This was excellent and the writing was top of the line!! Damn and the shower scene......wow!! Give us some more!!!

I would love to read more of your work!

An actual Interracial LOVE story. Very rare on this site. Thank you for a very good, very erotic story.

That was so sensual, especially the part where he was staring at her intensely. I would like to read about their backstory. This was a fantastic bw/wm story! I hope you continue.

Loved it!

How repetitiously appropriate and yet inadequate are all these 100 scores and positive comments.<P>

This was seriously good work Authoress as well as an impressive beginning here. The racial differences played a small but important part overall with out drowning the excellent work.<P>

With High Regard

I have to disagree with gentility, there definitely was a story here, with a beginning, middle and end. It was small and wonderfully formed. I also don't think that this was just about sex, this was more of a love story.

I'd love to read their back story (Maybe find out what her name was?) and anything else you'd care to write.

Thank you and keep up the good work!

This story said so much with very little so to speak and based on the scores, it's obvious the writer did a hell of a job. Some good shit, like hitting a joint and having flashbacks on being fucked right!

I like his shyness...the tenderness of the story...her reaction to his touch. Jayha

I likey!!! A lot! Very descriptive and sensual without being vulgar. Reads like it really happened. And if it did, "Work That!" Good job. Thank you.

Very well written. Excellent. Thank you!

i loved this story i wish i could meet a white guy whod wanan do that with me it made me feel so wow lol keep on worting

I loved this story! It was erotic and sensual with needing to be crass! Great job!

This was a very sexy story and these two are so hawt together. Thanks for a great read.

This was muy caliente! A tad irresponsible because of the lack of a condom or pulling out. Still hot though....

One of the best I've read. And very, very hot.

i loved it.

perfect descrition really took my mind there...and it was great :)

luvd it cant wait to read the next chapter xx

Such an awesome series, one of the best I've ever read.

Keep it coming...

You have wonderful gift that is writing. Don't let it go to waste.

that was amazing!!!

'Nuff said.