My Day at the Mall Ch. 08

Glad To See This

But all it was was a short tease. I hope its not going to be months before the next installments. This is a good story and worth the effort to both finish it and to read it.

Please...

longer chapters, closer together would be nice...

Finally!

Keep the quality up... I can wait for installments. IF somewhat impatiently!

Finally back from your vacation

I was beginning to wonder if you had abandoned this story or were on an extended vacation. Looks like your back.

Thanks for a great read!

Where have you been for the last 6 months?????

Well Wayne, old friend, I had just about given up on you when you turn out another chapter! Even though this chapter is short, it has been crafted to your usual high standard so full marks for this. However, and this is a big however, while having to reread previous chapters to refresh is not too much of a chore, having to wait almost 6 months for a "fill in" of little more than 2000 words just pisses me off! This is not the Landrious1 of the previous epic "The Last 24 Hours" I am sorry to say. Still, I continue to live in hope! Pete.

wow

It continues to be a great story. cant wait for more of it.

Please, More Chapters

Great, keep the chapters coming

Adding my two cents

Like the other commenters, I hope your Muse will inspire you to complete this story. Your writing makes me think of Eric Flint's writing style in his "Kildar" series.

after the essay,i want to see if you're a free man

you're one of the best writers on this site.give us your stories and thanks for your time.let us know if there will be a long time in between chapters.

VeryGood

Hope you finsh this!

Keep the chapters coming

Good story line. Reads a lot like John Ringo. I want to see this story continue, not just fizzle as some of the stories on here seem to do.

Worth rereading, but new chptrs would be better

I like this story enough to come back and re-read it from time to time. We have emailed and I know your story, some of it anyway. I keep hoping to see a new chapter posted. Hey, if you could get back into writing mode it might help take your mind off negative issues. :>)

-- srgeek --

please finish it

Please please please finish this

pls pls pls.. finish it!

Finish it dude.. this is way way tooo good!

awsome

loved it, whens the next comeing out?

Love it!

Any more coming our way soon?

PLEZZ WRITE MOR3!!!!

THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!! I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT. GREAT STORYLINE AND I LOVE THE WAY U ADDED SOMETHING SO MODERN ( AND UNFORTUNATELY THIS DOES HAPPEN IN AMERICA) TO THE USUAL DRY DAMSILLE IN DESTRESS ACT!!! PERFECT LOVELY STORY KEEP WRITING MORE PLEZZ!!!!

Awsome

you need to get to it and Finish this Story.
Very Good Reading.

I'm dyng here..

while waiting for this most excellent tale to be finished. Do I need to get down on my knees and start praying to the computer Gods for a completion?

great

please finish this it is to good to just languish

Sometimes

Given this story which can easily be not that much fiction. I think the whole human race can use a little bit of cleanup of it's gene pool. I know who to start, but where does it end. Rapists, people who injure a child delibertly (I do not consider a few swats on the backside an injury. People must learn respect for authority) and drug dealers all deserve the death penality. A 90 day administrative rule to assure all legal steps have been followed and then up against the wall.
Having said that legalize street drugs. let the government be the distributer.
make the price so low as to drive the illegals out of business It would undermine most of the power of gangs and messes like in Mexico right now. It would also reduce the drug related crime. So Says I

Great Story

Great writing. The plot is fit for a novel or Hollywood. The intimate scenes are great, and your dialogue is awesome.

Hope you are getting better from your attack and I will be waiting for future stories. My prayers are with you.

PLEEEASE!!!!!

Don't be so mean . . .
I just gotta know what's next!
No fair leaving a girl hanging like this.
Wayne wouldn't be such a tease & he won't be very happy with you if you make me cry.
Pretty please you finish the story?

Sweet

This is just too good !
you are so bad to just stop like that. I want more. Please!

Please

I just found this story and read it all today, i noticed you updated your Bio on Feb 11, hoping to see you continue this story.

Read the man's biog

and wish him well.


I feel that his recovery is so much more important than we reader's pleasure.

look dickwad

If you cherish what is now days known as your package YOU will continue this little fireside reading.
I will find you and we will play good cop bad cop until you cough up some more words.
Seriously, I am thinking this story kinda got away from you and pulling it back together is a struggle. I wish I had a clue as to what direction to let this story take except for Winslow to die an agonizing death via his own drug addiction problems and him giving up some 'bad' people.
As for our hero, he is too hot for public consumption so his Mall job is gone. Maybe through the girls they could be enfolded into an Irish community somewhere off the beaten path.
you have created a fun monster, dont let it eat ya,

A Pleasure

I found your stories the other day. I hope your recovery is/has proceeded well.

Please, please, please continue this story. Very rarely are we treated prose, characterization and setup that flows as well as this.

Finish the story PLEASSEE

I read the story, today, First time. It stopped and is unfinished. Pleasseee finish the story. Give us a very happy and safe ending. All the bad guy in jail or dead. Thanks. Retired military with 34 yrs. Sqhd German ...

please

I hope you heal and get yourself well enough to start writing again. you have to much talent to waste.we need you to finish this story.please.

kudos for a well done story

I hope that your healing proceeds apace and that you are able to continue writing. I'd love to find out what happens with this story.
B

Just found it and loved it!

From the comments I see that there is a reason for the delay...I have no idea what it is but I hope that it gets cleared up because this is a story that ranks in my top 10 for reads. More please!

PLEASE MORE

Please do more I happen to run across your story when I was looking for a different story, when I found yours and so far it was remarkable I will be looking forward to reading more of it and some of your others that you have written as well.

Great story.

I was quite displeased to run out of chapters. I will have to write your name down as my memory is too short to remember it and I will follow up later to see if you have written more. Thank you for writing. One loooong chapter to finish up would be OK.

My Day at the Mall

Sure wish you'd finish this story. I'm facinated with the story.

Outstanding story

This is one of my favorite stories, I hope you can finish it in the near future. I really want to see how everything works out. Excellent writing, thank you.

This needs to be done...

Please please please complete this story. Please. Without a doubt one of the greats...

where

where is the rest don't leave us hanging.

Please finish the story

Please finish the story. You can't leave us hanging!

Please Finish!

This story is awesome. And so addictive.

I really REALLY hope you can finish this soon!

Great story

Great story finish it

So sorry...hope you are still with us...you are a talented writer!

I was sorry to see what happened to you in your bio and hope the passing of time has kept you with us to one day again bless us with your prose. I put you as a favorite author!

Where are the next chapters to finish the story?

just would like to know if there is an ending to this story

Finish this!

I don't expect Landrius to finish this as it has been about nine years since the last entry. But if someone else were to pick it up, that would be welcome.