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Proper Thanks Ch. 02

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by Anonymous06/28/08

good!

The ending was very smart.......hot sex scene too. But i wish you had told us what he looked like more. Keep writing though.

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by Koreavet06/28/08

Me too!

I pulled a stunt like this about 65 years ago. Not as successfully as Lex, but pretty good for the times.

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by SecretFantasy6906/29/08

Very different...but good...I like...

Good story overrall. Are you going to continue? I'd like him to meet a woman who can break his heart and tame him. Yes, I would love to see that.

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by divisionred07/19/08

I KNEW IT THE DIRTY DOG

I KNEW THAT HE AND THE OTHER GUY WERE WORKING TOGETHER...GREAT STORY. THANKS

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by THELOVELY1GLO05/09/11

Karma

As Shakespeare said,"revenge is a dish best sered cold!'

My,My, my I am waiting for the tables to turn on them, for the
bartender to be a drag or for her boyfriend to be waiting outside in a car for her and they get caught.

This is so sad, that people actually have to deceive and manipulate others into giving them what they want!!!

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by SpicySynAmon10/21/12

LOL... This guy really has Balls!!

Lex is a 'pussy thief' in every sense of the word. I would love to know what guy gave you the idea to come up with such a cool storyline. I was really thinking he was some 'good guy' that deserved to be given a little booty. But now I see he's an ass. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope he gets caught, but not too soon.. Syn'

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by ariesgirl11/09/12

Dang! I really thought Lex was a good guy. Why he got to play games, I'm quite sure some of those females would've had sex with him without them being set up. I guess some people get off on that kind of stuff.

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by Anonymous01/10/13

Cute and smart

Love that twist in the story line, it always adds that little something sweet. Gotta like Lex even thou he's a sneaky fox. Would've also liked to have had a better description of his physique. Keep writing about his "heroic adventures" and thank,thank,thank you for posting something different.

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by AMHJ8910/04/14

Lex is a prick but at least his bed time antics make up for it

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by Comentarista8207/07/15

Bit of a...

...letdown. Alex seemed decent, but then how how spoke to Jayden was crass; I suppose it foreshadowed the "setup" routine he used, although it's a letdown to see it was only a setup.

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