If she wants to write about fucking a stranger,thats what she should do.The story was well written,easy to read,and hot.
She has a very vivid imagination,which I enjoy reading what she is thinking about.If you take what is written as a fantasy,or real life,it is still hot and sexy.Thanks for the great post........Rich
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Anonymous06/29/08
She is a slut
No problem, all guys love sluts, I just don't understand why the guy married her. You fuck sluts, kiss them on the cheek, slap them on the ass and send them home. You never ever marry or fall in love with one, cause they never really fall in love with you. Just themselves.
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Anonymous06/29/08
Erotica at its best
This story fits the literotica.com genre' of erotic liturature and it was as good as one can find in here. Anybody who insists on complaining about the sex is simply in the wrong room.
This was a great story, and a fantasy! If you want deep and meaningful reasons as to why people do the things they do go read Dostoevsky! I loved the abandonment, the freedom you gave the characters and the fact that they started and ended up together.
Millie
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Anonymous06/29/08
Awesome!!!
MaryAnn really knows how to relate an erotic story - got me all hot and bothered - actually all her stories do. This one was especially hot since i have seen similar things while on the road traveling. Great one MaryAnn!!!
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Anonymous06/29/08
Great
hi There MerryAnne loved your writing style and look forward to more stories
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Anonymous06/29/08
Erotic and thoughtful
What more can a reader expect in a site devoted to erotica? This is the best.
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Anonymous06/30/08
A very erotic story of two idiots without a brain
in their head. Yeppers cant count the number of ways this could and should have gone wrong. Been said before, will be said again, stupid people do stupid things.
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Anonymous07/28/08
Junk
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Anonymous09/06/11
best story I have ever read. I liked her talking to him and telling him what to do and how she liked it.
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Anonymous09/14/11
Damn females cannot write a shit worth. None of them.
Sex on the road. Pretty linear (pun intended!) Truckers don't have STDs (or dangerous thoughts or habits!) Thank DDE (AKA - Ike!) for Interstate Rest Stops! Who needs lot-lizards when professional writers are traveling?
Erotic? Maybe?
But why did these two get married.? I mean what was the point if she was going to shag other people.
Nicely done
Comical, believable and hot. Best, Ken
Poorly Conceived and Poorly Written Excrement
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what the hell,its her fantasy,
If she wants to write about fucking a stranger,thats what she should do.The story was well written,easy to read,and hot.
She has a very vivid imagination,which I enjoy reading what she is thinking about.If you take what is written as a fantasy,or real life,it is still hot and sexy.Thanks for the great post........Rich
She is a slut
No problem, all guys love sluts, I just don't understand why the guy married her. You fuck sluts, kiss them on the cheek, slap them on the ass and send them home. You never ever marry or fall in love with one, cause they never really fall in love with you. Just themselves.
Erotica at its best
This story fits the literotica.com genre' of erotic liturature and it was as good as one can find in here. Anybody who insists on complaining about the sex is simply in the wrong room.
Agree
With last comment,one of the most erotic stories I have read
Fun Easy Read
This was a great story, and a fantasy! If you want deep and meaningful reasons as to why people do the things they do go read Dostoevsky! I loved the abandonment, the freedom you gave the characters and the fact that they started and ended up together.
Millie
Awesome!!!
MaryAnn really knows how to relate an erotic story - got me all hot and bothered - actually all her stories do. This one was especially hot since i have seen similar things while on the road traveling. Great one MaryAnn!!!
Great
hi There MerryAnne loved your writing style and look forward to more stories
Erotic and thoughtful
What more can a reader expect in a site devoted to erotica? This is the best.
A very erotic story of two idiots without a brain
in their head. Yeppers cant count the number of ways this could and should have gone wrong. Been said before, will be said again, stupid people do stupid things.
Junk
00
best story I have ever read. I liked her talking to him and telling him what to do and how she liked it.
Damn females cannot write a shit worth. None of them.
Superbly done
Outstanding job.
Straight-forward
Sex on the road. Pretty linear (pun intended!) Truckers don't have STDs (or dangerous thoughts or habits!) Thank DDE (AKA - Ike!) for Interstate Rest Stops! Who needs lot-lizards when professional writers are traveling?
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