All Comments on 'A Slow Unwinding Ch. 01'

by deSilentio

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Britease almost 16 years ago

Too short

Hard to rate

Needs to be a bit longer to catch enough interest

Caught mine though!

digdaddyrich almost 16 years ago

You just got started when it was over

There is no doubt about your ability to write,and I think this story has so many ways that it can go,I will have to keep a look out for the next chapter.It looks like that Sara is going to fuck over her boy friend and fuck the other guy.Thanks for the post...........Rich