Truly excellent first story: I'll look out for you in future
by
Anonymous07/04/08
Please Proofread!
All the missing apostrophes, uncapitalized letters, and comma mistakes make this story much harder to read than it need be.
by
Anonymous08/11/08
hot
dear marielit...you are a filthy perverted slut. i have known only one woman like you. it was wondwerful but we burned each other out in less than 3 years. between the two of us, we gave several women and men what im sure as some pretty great memories.
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Great 1st story
I thought it was hot, especially the beginning. I look forward to your next story.
GR8 - more please !
GR8 - more please !
excellent first story marie
Truly excellent first story: I'll look out for you in future
Please Proofread!
All the missing apostrophes, uncapitalized letters, and comma mistakes make this story much harder to read than it need be.
hot
dear marielit...you are a filthy perverted slut. i have known only one woman like you. it was wondwerful but we burned each other out in less than 3 years. between the two of us, we gave several women and men what im sure as some pretty great memories.
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