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He Controls His Step-Daughter

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/28/08

HOT

Please tell me there will be more!

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by Anonymous06/28/08

VERY HOT

Keep writing!

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by Anonymous06/29/08

Hot but...

I enjoyed it...it was hot...but make a note to read the story before submitting it...there were atleast 3 typos in the first 2 paragraphs

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by Anonymous06/30/08

yum

I like the way James brings Marie 'down' sort of humbles her with his control of the situation... yum. Next time a little penetration!

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by psylic07/15/08

excellent

that was thrilling! well written. tension, fear, longing.
well done!

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by sexgal196605/22/10

OMG

Hope you write more about this........the step dad sounds soooooooooo hot! Would love for him to fuck me.....

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by Craig5204/14/11

Very Hot!!

I enjoyed it and how he took control of her.

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by Anonymous09/30/12

Please write a sequel that was the hottest story I have ever read!

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