All Comments on 'Love/ Precipitation/ Noun'

by Tzara

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bluebellbluebellalmost 16 years ago
The Channel of Gravelines, Grand-Fort-Philippe

There are some poems of yours where I have the distinct impression of knowing you've built them. Built them with your hands, invested the energy and loose poetic ends of your mind. Plank by plank. It looks effortless at posting when we're allowed to sink our teeth in, but there must have been assiduous construction. I can almost feel the residue afterwards as I read them. They continue to do the heavy lifting, even after you've allowed them their freedom. Thank you for sharing.

lindianalindianaalmost 16 years ago
Truly thought provoking

Giving us something to incite our senses. Excellent!

unpredictablebijouunpredictablebijouover 15 years ago
you really do

make me want to print out a sheaf of your work and carry it around for whenever I want to seduce someone.

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