All Comments on 'Life in the Seoul Ch. 02'

by mori07

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Too rushed

I'm really liking the story but it just seems too rushed and it's lacking depth. Slow down the past a bit and the depth will deepen.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Excellent

I hope you finish this story, you just need a beta reader. You have great talent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Love it!

I'm glad Michelle and Jae Hwa work through their differences. It's a good thing that Michelle worked up the confidence to tell Jae Hwa the truth. Hope you add more pages to chapter 2. And more chapters to this sweet interesting story.

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieabout 9 years ago
I need more

Will you ever comeback and finish this story?

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