All Comments on 'Walking into the Wrong Cabin Ch. 01'

by Obsessive_john

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melsdadmelsdadalmost 16 years ago
A story should have a start and a finish

I loved your story, but for Pete's sake, when you post a story, at least have the courtesy to finish it.

It's not always easy to find part 2 or whatever, weeks or months later.

Now I'm stuck with a boner and no way to finish, you're worse than a woman, lol.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Loved it

PLEAS, PLEASE, PLEASE make another chapter and SOON!!!

RoammeRoammealmost 16 years ago
Why?

Why is it so violent and mean? I kinda liked the sex but was turned off by his mean violence

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Pretty fucking messed up dude, you obviously have anger issues with women.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good

I acutally liked it. Yeah the guy's rough, but it fits the story category. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Sara's Dad

In real life would reach out an touch John with his 3006! Hunting season. good fiction though.

BobossweetnessfreakBobossweetnessfreakalmost 7 years ago
Horrific!!

Non con is one thing but this is brutal!!! You don't EVER punch a woman in the stomach, or anyone for that matter!! As soon as that happened I lost any interest in this piece of garbage!! Talk about a woman hater!!!

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