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A story should have a start and a finish
I loved your story, but for Pete's sake, when you post a story, at least have the courtesy to finish it.
It's not always easy to find part 2 or whatever, weeks or months later.
Now I'm stuck with a boner and no way to finish, you're worse than a woman, lol.
Loved it
PLEAS, PLEASE, PLEASE make another chapter and SOON!!!
Why?
Why is it so violent and mean? I kinda liked the sex but was turned off by his mean violence
Pretty fucking messed up dude, you obviously have anger issues with women.
Good
I acutally liked it. Yeah the guy's rough, but it fits the story category. Great job.
Sara's Dad
In real life would reach out an touch John with his 3006! Hunting season. good fiction though.
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