All Comments on 'My Son's Best Friend Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
great sadness

very well done, but somehow it doesn't make me happy... Please continue with this oasis of reflection

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Nicely done

This is one of the better written stories on Literotica. Just two comments: first, it would be nice for a little more description of the actual sex act. Secondly, unless you were making a pun, it's "vise-grip" and not "vice-grip."

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

***Thanks for the read.

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