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She had a name but I don't know it

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by LeBroz07/02/08

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This poem has been selected for listing in Wednesday's New Poems Review.



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by PandoraGlitters07/02/08

Well done!

I like the use of repetition in this and the way the poem winds tight like a coiled wire.

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