All Comments on 'Young Widow'

What a great first effort! Extra kudos for grammar and style points. And ultimately, the reality of it all brings it home.

Write more!

I loved this! Excellent job!

I loved this! Excellent job!

A fine effort for someone's first submission. The fact that it's true and from a woman makes it even better. Sorry about the loss of your husband- good people in good marriages are a rare thing these days. Definately let us know what else happens. And as far as what you've become now- I'd say that you're only coming out of a very difficult point in your life and now your learning something new. It may be a cliche, but Life does indeed go on. Good luck.

Don't underestimate your ability as a writer. You tell a wonderfully erotic story with characters who feel real and alive. I would be willing to bet you would have no trouble writing "fiction" as well. Thank you for letting us take a peek into your life in such a beautiful way. And welcome to Lit. - Chip

I love true stories . . . and stories that sound truthful. Yours was both, as well as very erotic. I predict a great future for you here on Lit. Welcome . . . and keep writing!

i liked it. nothing kinky, but hot. its about regular people enjoying sex. and that to me, is what make this story erotic.

Very nicely written. A true story always reads well. Thanks for sharing. Based on your Lit Profile, I take it that there will more stories cumming soon?

Got me off soooo nice! I was widowed 10 years ago, so I can really relate to this story. I was 36 at the time... LOL, I should tell my nasty stories about fucking the cabinet maker and all of that in my grief!

Keep writing, I really like your style!

Great story, love to read more about you & your healing, sexual healing, etc. I will be watching for your other submissions. Thanks

Loved the read - please continue as yur real dating life continues....

Suzie, after reading Chapter 2, I had to come back and re-read this one. Call me whatever, it's the way I am. Thank you for sharing these personal experiences. I love it! Gary

Suzie, after reading Chapter 2, I had to come back and re-read this one. Call me whatever, it's the way I am. Thank you for sharing these personal experiences. I love it! Gary

I read your most recent offering and was inspired to read your earlier work. I am so glad I did. The reality of your situation comes through in your writing. The honesty makes it an enjoyable read and brings the reader along as you re-enter a world you once enjoyed and now find you still can and will. Keep writing. The real-life experiences add so much to this site.

What a fabulous start to this series. I'm definitely looking forward to reading them all

Sue,

That was a great beginning, and I can't wait to read more!!

My condolences Sue, hardest thing is to lose someone until you realise how lucky you were to have them in the first place.

Thank you for sharing such a personal experience, I love your writing style - nice flow, and great imagery!

I haven't submitted anything myself but you are an inspiration..... Now, I'm off to read the rest :)

Excellent first read, looking forward to reading the rest. You are a talented writer.

That was mean. All that and no real intercourse. And she wanted it as much as he did. Hardly fair to him or herself.

But the contradiction between a concern regarding STD's with penetrative sex, yet no concern in giving oral sex was a distraction

It's really hard to share real emotions and make them sexy too. Thank you for letting us inside your head. I think you've established a level of intimacy with your readers.

That was a nice hot read. More power to you! My ex isn't dead, but after we divorced with three kids, a house, sometimes two jobs, sex wasn't the top of my agenda. With my two daughters back at college, my son was a busy senior in high school, I had some time. My two older brothers and their wives kept telling me I looked great and had to get out there. Where's there? I had a drink with a guy after work but didn't know how/when or if to move forward. Two months later, he took me out for my 45th birthday, I gave him a blowjob in his car, felt like blowing my boyfriend in high school, my ex was the only guy to fuck me, this guy was my third cock. Sad. A month later my sexual drought ended. While visiting my daughters, I "got blacked" by a man I met in a sports bar. I had told him, "I've never been with a black man before, actually I've only my ex has fucked me." He took care of that and my tight unused pussy. He always delivers, hard, violent, racial fuckings, black and blue from his vise like hands. Sex is great, I cum often and I'm no longer chubby.