But felt kind of choppy in places. Some more time for character development would have been good. Please do keep up the work
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Anonymous07/20/08
Hoping for part 2
Hi, this was a great story. Especially the 'smaller' girls and the 'taller' guy. I hope you will keep it between the guy and the girls. I love femdom stories, I can't wait what more you are going to write about them :)
I'll give you 50% for effort and for reasonable grammar. The credibility quotient is pretty low, however. Maybe this story belongs in another category like BDSM, or some other category with strong women and physically weak men. Possibly this is the author's fantasy but I really don't feel it fits into "erotic couplings." The main theme revolves around domination of the male in this story and even though we are not quite at the full bondage stage yet, I feel it is only a matter of time. We have the small penis, small ejaculate volume, wishy-washy weak-willed male who does what he is told, the woman orders for him right from the start, need I say more?
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Nice story
But felt kind of choppy in places. Some more time for character development would have been good. Please do keep up the work
Hoping for part 2
Hi, this was a great story. Especially the 'smaller' girls and the 'taller' guy. I hope you will keep it between the guy and the girls. I love femdom stories, I can't wait what more you are going to write about them :)
There should be a male humiliation category . . .
I'll give you 50% for effort and for reasonable grammar. The credibility quotient is pretty low, however. Maybe this story belongs in another category like BDSM, or some other category with strong women and physically weak men. Possibly this is the author's fantasy but I really don't feel it fits into "erotic couplings." The main theme revolves around domination of the male in this story and even though we are not quite at the full bondage stage yet, I feel it is only a matter of time. We have the small penis, small ejaculate volume, wishy-washy weak-willed male who does what he is told, the woman orders for him right from the start, need I say more?
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