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I am so glad to see more of your work
You are an awesome story teller, and I look for anything new of yours every day. Thanks for the great reading.
I like these...
invitational stories. It's fun to read a different take on a song by different authors. And as always, this promises to be a good read from DGH. I still am here, ur young & nubile fan in Europe. lol XOXO 4 U.... lol
Amazing
It's amazing what can be developed from a song! Another great one in progress from one of the best at realistic stories. Thanks for a winner.
Love it DG
Just keep writing. Its always nice to read an author who's work always leaves you feeling good when you finish reading the story.
Great story as usual
You are without a doubt my favorite author, I look forward to your next story.
DG Hear
Thank you for the nice comments. Chapter 2 is due to be posted tomorrow. Let me know what you think of the ending.
Also, please take the time to read the stories from the other authors of the Country Western song invitational as they are posted. It lets us know whether to keep having the invitational. We will let the readers decide.
Thank you
DG Hear
Plumbers Unite
I always read your stories and you always deliver a an interesting and thoughtful read. This was no different, an excellent beginning that I look forward to reading each chapter.
off to a good start....
The Tigers won? The setting for this story must have been last year! LOL. Okay, okay, they're not all that bad. They have won a few games this season. Although, I woulda liked this story even more if you used the Red Wings! Nice story and set in my hometown, too! Will keep an eye out for the next chapter!
Detroit has a baseball team?
Oh, that's right ... I remember reading in USA today about them getting a AA team - the Detroit Kittens or something like that!
Nice story; a great sense of time and place. The characters seem real and people you would like to know.
Look forward to the rest of it.
Jack
Smooth Story
Sam has enchanted me. Good writing and fine people.
Great start
Looking forward to the second half. Thanks for a good read.
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