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Wonderful conclusion!
But still no Red Wings games! LOL. Just kidding. Great story!
Great finish, DG!
Let's see ... what shall we do for a theme for the next "invitational" this fall?
Nice effort. Loved the Sam character. She seems like someone I'd like to know.
Regards, Jack
Never having visited Detroit
I was expecting something dark but this works for me.
Thanks DG
Wonderful
I really enjoyed this story from start to finish. You are without a doubt a very talented writer, I look forward to reading your next story. BRAVO
Good one!
Love the stories with characters I'd like to meet! Sam is one that fits. When you do a slice of life it is real. Thanks for another winner!
so pleasant a read!
another first rate love story. i envy your writings. always read your stories...keep them coming if you can.
Great story
Thanks for a good read and a great ending. Keep writing what you like.
I Enjoyed It...
from start to finish. I great story and as always I wait for more from you. Thanks.
Great Job DG
Fine story. I loved it. Far too few written like this anymore. Thanks for the post.
Great story!
How does one writer write so many great stories? You are without question one of the best writers on this site. I look forward to reading your next submission.
A fan of DG Hear
Who would of thought it?
What? A couple who wait? Wow - what a novel idea, at least at this site! Excellent love story. many thanks
Aren't You Something Author
Speaking of songs - I Feel Good & its all your fault Mr. Hear.
He - Perks a body up like some good news from home.
Needless to say - You are appreciated and looked forward 2 & Don't Change a
With Very High Regard
I enjoy....
being a part of these invitationals. You've given us another good story, DG. Is it time for our next one yet??
another good one...
Thanks for the good read, DGH. Your nubile fan. XO's...lol
romance
hi this was a really good story mate it was lovely and very romantic u shuld be proud of urself
I though the story matched up well with the song
I really enjoyed this story. Actually, it was very believable, false rumors, shyness and all.
DGH, I like it that you vary the genres you write in. Thanks again!
Damn after reading enough, I need to scroll up and hit the favourite button! Just though I'd leave a comment, truly brilliant stories. Keep em up :)
Ask before the ring
You should ask the lady to marry you before you get the ring.
1-she may not say yes
2-do you know her ring size?
3-do you know the style ring that will please her or which styles she doesn't like?
5 stars!!!
I can't stop reading your stories. I know they where written years ago. Anyways, just wanted to say they brought me memories of my past girlfriends. Their was one actually in particular that reminded me of Sam. We care for eachother but I lost her because I was a idiot, who got jealous over nothing!!!....
P.S. I would appreciate we kept my love life a secret. Lol && if someone ever finds that special someone hold on && don't be to quick to judge everything they bcuz it can cost u!!!
5 star fun.
Really nice story!
WONDERFULL STORY
Another Fantastic story from a very gifted Author! I love romance stories and there is that! Also humor! Love is a many splendid thing. Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
JUST LOVED IT
a brilliant story of finding a girl and falling in love.....with a few nice twists on the way.....can't beat a great love story...
Building a marriage
It shows when love is found before sex it makes a strong marriage. .
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