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Fantastic
Wonderful story, I loved the way you have the erotic content worked in so well with th ebuilding of the scene, the mounting excitement, the way you bring the feelings in, such a wonderful picture painted with words, I could "place" myself there. Would love to read more form you, much more
i loved it
thanks for letting me know your story was postedl
Purrrrrrrrrrrrr
Kiss you love love
Supurb!
:)
Sultry
Loved it Red. Nice work KISS
Sizzling!
I enjoyed reading this fabulous piece. Beautifully written and so sensual.
Very sexy!
Loved it, very sexy!
thx for sharing
The sandmn(Sandy) likes. Very nice
yummy
As always a very vivid read. Think I need a cold shower now. *smile*
Very erotic...
Good story...
WOW
Left me speechless and breathless
Simply wonderful
A lovely story about two people who obviously care for one another. It is the realism that gets me, and you have done superb work in that department. Beyond that, you have vivid imagery and a sense of eroticism in the truest sense of the word. Very, very good!
Better than ever
I feel everything you write as if we were together. A fantastic job, again. It's "hard" to read your erotica, if you know what I mean, "hard" and "wet", too. "Engineer"
So hot!
I always enjoy reading your stories even the second or third time around. I can visualize everything you describe. Gets me hard just reading them. You are an amazing woman.
eros7777
Thank You!!
Irish I loved the story. I can't wait to read the other's I always knew there was something special about you...Now I know. Cya in chat............Rnd
So very sexy
very very hot thx for sharing
Only a Beautiful erotic Redhead could write this
Irish happens to be just this erotic, and the only way it could be more arousing is if it was coming from her lips. As I was reading this, I thought of myself as being the man who was in this story, lusting and loving this beautiful redhead. The only problem I could find in the story was the mispelling of the name Captain. She spelled it Kevin! :)
Maybe I should write my own story of a beautiful Redhead who I fell in love with from the first time I saw her going up a stairway. A title hmmmmmmmm? I guess "Stairway to Heaven" is already taken. Maybe "A View of Heaven from the bottom of a Stairway"
Kinda long but accurate!
thanks!
Thanks for inviting me to read this. I enjoyed sharing your creation.
Mondays likes
mmmm Irish you sure do know how to hold a readers attention. Very cool story .....Mondays(wink)
Great Story
I loved this story. It is exciting thinking you are doing something that she isn't aware of...of course we know better...LOL.
Is it possible?
Is it possible for a woman to sleep through a sexual climax? Not being a woman, and being a man who has never tried having sex with a sleeping woman, I can't say. However, I must say this was a very good, and short erotic story. Thanks.
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