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wow
what a great premise. i hope you have fun with it.
A really fun story.
I love the way your imagination works. And I have to say I appreciate a writer who does all the things that make a story easy to read; grammer, spelling and good flow.
Perfect Starting Story
Great Promise of what is to become, and perfect for a series.
really empty
I hope there is more, because this did not take us anywhere.
The journey was good
Don't think the idea needed to go anywhere, as it was a well written short story.
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